All of Harry's problems of his other life will be fixed by Christmas at this rate. Very nice. the Pettigoo was a nice touch by the way. And if AD is the Artful Dodger, what shall we call Severus Snape?
You write extremely well. I could picture all of Snape's actions. And the part where hi pinched the bridge of his nose and said "You called him Lord Voldauvent, didn't you?" I actually pinched the bridge of my nose in mimicry you wrote it so well. Thankfully no one is here...
I'm starting to really like your Percy. Very good story.
I loved your Hermione! I'm going to say she's a bit OOC just because she wasn't that awesome in JKR's books, especially as a first year. And I have a new favorite background character. Did we meet the Slyth prefects in cannon? Love Love Love
I hope you inteded this to be funny, or I have a sick sence of humor, I was laughing so much my cheeks are burning. Oh, and I assume you'll have many more comments soon. Someone just recced this story for the entire yahoo group for A Year Like No Other.
Aw......!!!!!!! ^^
This fic has been such a joy to read. I loved watching the characters change and grow. Excellently done!
| Title: Chapter 64
| 21 Feb 2010 5:15 am
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| Reviewer: april (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed your story. The sped up timeline threw me but all in all it was a great story to read. Thank you
| Title: Chapter 64
| 30 Jan 2010 11:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Wiccan (Anonymous)
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After a second read (months or years apart) I am still amazed at your prowess with words. I adored how Severus is thinking an irritated cuff and Harry considers it a caress...too funny.
The mental 'letters' had me howling with laughter.
All in all...one of the best fanfics written.
| Title: Chapter 64
| 15 Jan 2010 7:00 am
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| Reviewer: ML (Anonymous)
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Ah, but we still owe much to you. Thank you. Right more. Be well.
| Title: Chapter 62
| 15 Jan 2010 6:42 am
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| Reviewer: ML (Anonymous)
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Thank you for bringing Harry back! You are no longer "killing me."
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