| Title: Chapter 46
| 01 Jun 2009 3:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous)
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I just love this story. Please, please keep the updates coming.
DD
Hey, I love this story it's really great. I was so excited when you updated with three new chapters at once then I saw they were all identical, just thought I'd point them out to you. Keep up the excellent work!
Wow. Thats all I can think of for a start-off. That was probably one of the most emotional Harry-Snape stories I have ever read. It had me quite near tears at some points. You really have an extraordinary talent when it comes to creating parental relationships that involve Snape and Harry. I hope desperately that you will either continue this story, or write a new one, because I absolutely loved it. This last scene, or chapter I guess would be a more appropriate term, was very emotional and well written, especially with the entire "Da" sequence. I can't wait to read more. This story is awesome and fantastic, I think I'm going to read it again.
| Title: Chapter 36
| 11 May 2009 9:11 pm
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| Reviewer: AN ITALIAN READER - CHIARA (Anonymous)
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O MY ... IT IS WONDERFUL !!! I NEARLY CRYED CAUSE OF THIS CHAPTER , YOU WRITE VERY VERY VERY WELL ... THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC !!!I SPEND MY LAST 5 DAYS READING YOUR MASTERPIECE, I CULDN'T STOP MYSELF IN READING THIS , NO LESS TO GO TO BED.....YOU ARE TALENTED , MAYBE YOU SHOULD WRITE WORD WITHOUT ABRIDGEMENT/ABBREVIATION , BUT YOU ARE VERY TALENTED AND MAYBE ONE DAY I WILL READ A BOOK BELONGED FROM YOU ...NEVER SAY NEVER .
sp: I'M NOT VERY GOOD AT ENGLISH-WRITER 'CAUSE I AM ITALIAN AND I STUDY ENGLISH SINCE 2007, SO EXCUSE MY GRAMMAR MISTAKE AND I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY IF YOU HAVE IN PLAN TO DO OR WRITING AN OTHER SO I CAN SPEND MY DAY DREAMING ON IT
Lol!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Oh I'm so looking forward to the next update. Look out Pettigrew, Snape's gonna get you!!!!
Lol. Poor Sevvie. Doesn't he realize that he's already a Gryffie???
Awwww! I LOVE THIS! Best chapter ever! The last two paragraphs are brilliant, and the whole scene between Harry and Snape was very emotive and believable. You were very sneaky about slipping the first 'Da' in - I didn't notice it at all, in fact I had to go back to see where it had happened - it was a very natural place to put it as well. Thank you for working so hard on the last few wonderful chapters!
Soooo cute!! Sorry I haven't reviewed in ...awhile. Make that...forever. Like since chapter 18... Don't worry I still love you :0)
The chapter I have been waiting for!!! AWWWWW....Snape is a DA!!! I loved the thoughts they each had at the end - thinking back to 5 months before and realizing how much better every thing is because of the presence of each other. Dumbledore was so right, 2 damaged people who needed each other!!
(sniff, sniff!)
I loved this chapter!!!
| Title: Chapter 36
| 12 Apr 2009 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Can't wait for the next update... You write great! You can visualize the characters and see how they react with your writing.
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