| Title: Chapter 6
| 08 Aug 2010 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Another really great chapter!
Harry catching the snitch over and over again is cool and I'm so glad that he's finally trusting Snape more (even if he doesn't know what to do sometimes lol)
And just so you know Snape rubbing Harry's back is pretty much the cutest thing ever :)
| Title: Chapter 4
| 08 Aug 2010 3:49 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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THIS STORY IS AMAZING!
seriously, it is *really* good. I thought the dialogue in this chapter was phenomenal. you did a great job writing out Harry's confusion and Snape's thought process trying to explain every single thing! I can't wait to read more!
| Title: Chapter 64
| 02 Aug 2010 2:01 am
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| Reviewer: tortilla lady (Anonymous)
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This was wonderfully written. The interactions between the characters were incredible. I really was left wanting more. I loved the inner-monologue for Severus & was greatly amused by his inner snarkiness. Thank you for a wonderful story!!
| Title: Chapter 64
| 27 Jun 2010 11:45 am
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| Reviewer: dorp (Anonymous)
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That was hands-down the best Harry Potter story I have ever read.
That is too funny. Three first-years, defeating the Dark Lord? With basic spells and *Quidditch moves*, not blood magic like Lily used? I guess Lucius Malfoy is sorted now.
"Snape drifted off to sleep, his last thought the memory of Harry’s expression as he lovingly touched his new broom."
Oh, yeah. He doesn't care *at all*...
Oh, dear Merlin, this is truly, utterly hilarious. Really, *really* funny. Love the characterization, too; I hate it when Snape relents too quickly for Harry. He's telling himself how much he hates the lad, and is so obviously loving being a father...it's too cute.
| Title: Chapter 64
| 21 Jun 2010 5:24 am
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| Reviewer: Bobbejean (Anonymous)
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This was an absolutely fabulous story!! I loved how you took so many things from the 'canon' and melded them into your story. It was great!! I also thought that you had Severous' personality and speech patterns spot on!! Truly amazing and I am so pleased to have been able to read the whole thing at once.
I'd love to read more stories you have authored.
Bobbejean@msn.com
its amazing that what JK did in 7 years, you did in two. The ending left me colmpletly satisfied, unlike cannon which btw I hated. Overall the story was amazing, good job :)
Nice, but James's whacking Harry was....uncalled for. Well, and Sev didn't have to go away too (sniffle for Harry). Otherwise, it's gr8 - gr8 humour and angst and drama....just GR8.
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