Loved this story. The little articles that Snape made in his head had me rolling. Also the way Snape kept coming up with alternate reasons why he was feeling things was great. Hope you keep writing and if you do publish anything, I'd really like to read that as well. Good luck.
Brilliant!! And so long!! Kuddos!!
| Title: Chapter 64
| 16 Apr 2010 2:18 am
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| Reviewer: Riverlover90@yahoo.com (Anonymous)
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This story was absolutely AMAZING!!!! I couldn't stop reading once I started. Unlike some other stories this one was excellently written with a great plot too. The only downside is that I would have preferred a sequel to an epilogue. But that's only because I am greedy and don't want to stop reading your work. Thank you so much for sharing this story with me. I quite enjoyed the dual perspective. Such as how you had Snape's perspective on being too harsh and Harry's perspective on Snape being too lenient. I also enjoyed the way you made the story flow even when you sped up the original books to get it all done in just about one year. Usually it feels rushed but you did an excellent job of having the characters give the reasons for their actions. All I can say is that the rating of 10 is almost too little. I hope you keep enjoying writing and sharing your awesome ability.
| Title: Chapter 46
| 04 Apr 2010 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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HA! Now THAT would be an AWESOME detention! God...if only WE had detentions like THAT in school! Lmao that would have been so awesome. Okay. I'm repeating myself. Sorry...but I can't help but giggle at these scenes...they're to fun!
This was a great chapter, but I think I'll dwell on the "you can't die with unused ice cream coupons" fact of the day. I'm sure you'll understand why. Umm, there was a big reason I didn't comment after Sev thought Harry died. You wrote the chapter too well.
Sing a song of sixpence,
A pocket full of rye.
Four and twenty blackbirds,
Baked in a pie.
The 'Puffs prolly wouldn't get a reference like that, would they? I think it's cute though. I had to look up exactly how many black birds were in the pies, but you are very clever.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 30 Mar 2010 8:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Ugh...no matter how many times I read this story, this chapter especially, I break down into tears. It tears my heart. Love it.
That was priceless! Pure priceless. You need to read Snapegirl's Broken Wings, she was a very good way of dismissing Um-bitch as well. I always like McG, but I'm liking her here even better. Oh and I forgot to comment last chapter, when you gave Harry the water and scrubbrushes I had a memory flash of Disney's The Sword in the Stone where Merlin magics the dishes clean, but ice scating? that's fun!
Albus' last line really tickled me.
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