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Reviews For Know Thyself
I like the fact that Shadow can speak now, though I'd be wary of harry deciding to try and annoy severus, the man doesn't tolerate disobedient little brats, y'know! Will Severus find out about Shadow soon? Author's Response: Great movie! I can finally move forward in Shadow's character development, which I'm happy about. I shall make sure Harry is very careful, the only thing is, Sev may end up annoyed no matter what he does! Severus may take a little time to find out about Shadow - I have to build up the evidence first. Plus, there's other things waiting to happen... Thanks for reviewing!
I really like how you detail little things such as the way you describe how apparating feels to Snape and how he quickens his pace when he's gets nervous. It really makes the characters come to life. Good stuff! It should be interesting the way the next few days pan out. Looking forward to the next update! Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you like the Apparating, me too! Yes, the next few days should be very interesting indeed...
Author's Response: Any time. I have actually considered putting that in, it would be very funny to read. Mental picture of Snape doing a double take, eyes wide! I shall put Minerva's reaction of being left in next time, but I think it's safe to say a looong time.
Looking forward to your next update! V. Author's Response: Yes, Shadow does help - pity he isn't solid. I daresay Snape will get his act together eventually in his own Snape-ish way. Thank you for reviewing!
Author's Response: That's great to hear, thank you! The next few days should be interesting...
Author's Response: Thank you! For all intents and purposes, Shadow is real, but it's complicated and will all be explained at the end of the story. I will definitely make sure the Dursleys learn something... Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, I was rather miffed when I realised I would have to let Lucius out from under the bush. If I didn't have an overall plot, I'd have left him there! The Dursleys certainly deserve what they get. I'm glad you enjoyed this!
The plot thickens Author's Response: heh heh - no Dursleys is definately an improvement! Like custard... Glad you like!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear it.
Author's Response: Yeah, he knows, but he doesn't know who. He is Harry, but for some reason has become sentient... |
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