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Title: Intruder Alert! 23 Nov 2008 2:17 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like your sense of imagery. Little things, such as how you describe the eerie glow, when the light came out of the wand, how you described the pain, and the hiss and pop of the spell. You make it seem so real.


    I'm looking forward to your next chapter, you've left us on a cliffe!

    Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I love doing little things like that in the chapter, but I wasn't sure if they were working as I'd hoped. Thanks for reassuring me! I apologise about the cliffie, but the story seemed to want me to leave it there.....!
Title: Intruder Alert! 23 Nov 2008 1:33 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It came to my mind if it wasn't Draco (the intruder). Maybe he came to seek solace? But chickened out?
    Awwww, guessing, guessing. Would you update soon, please? Mila

    Author's Response: An interesting idea about Draco... but no! Good thinkings by the way, keep it up! I shall fight the writer's block and see what I can come up with. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Intruder Alert! 23 Nov 2008 1:05 am
Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for another update! I look forward to seeing what schemes Harry and Shadow have planned for Snape haha. I'm also trying to guess who was trying to breach the wards at Snape's.. my first guess is Malfoy but I have a feeling it wasn't him...
    Anyways, great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reviewing! I am sure Harry and Shadow will be able to drive Snape to distraction without even trying :D You're right, it wasn't Malfoy, but...

    heh, I'm sorry, I'm getting good at this whole 'evil' thing.

Title: The Use of Magic 21 Nov 2008 2:06 am
Reviewer: Galaxyskier (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so refreshing! It's such a creative idea!

    I love the interaction between Harry and Shadow. Especially the bit where Shadow writes his message backwards on the paper and shows it to Harry lol. That was a great moment. I think you are characterizing Harry and Shadow nicely. :)

    And poor Snape. He's such a conflicted character. I hope DD clears up some of his insecurities soon!

    Sooo, now that Harry can hear Shadow, is he going to tell him how he knows that their father is still alive? ...Or was this answered already? I can't remember at the moment *goes to re-read*

    Oh, btw, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

    Author's Response:

    I'm really glad you like my story - I started it with the sole idea of trying to make it different from everyone else's. I love the Harry and Shadow bits too, and there will be more next chapter. Shadow doesn't know who their father is either, but there will be more evidence along the way. Snape will be taken off the hook soon, I promise!

    Thanks so much for your long review!

Title: The Use of Magic 18 Nov 2008 6:08 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wonder why Shadow has brown hair, is he the son of Remus Lupin? That doesn't make much sense. This is a very interesting story. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: I got sick of the idea that Harry must either have black or brown hair because of his parents - so I've done a mixture. A kind of coppery dark brown colour. Harry is Snape's son in this story, and I promise everything will be explained by the end. Thanks for reviewing and glad you like!
Title: The Use of Magic 17 Nov 2008 11:04 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful chapter! I loved the work with magic. Related to temper. Feeling hot in his palms. Lovely.
    I wonder if "Let me hear Shadow" means only Harry will hear him or if Severus will hear Shadow too...
    Snape is lovely. Softening up and don’t realising it’s happening. Lol. You can have big fun with it (and your readers with you).
    Mila

    Author's Response: Thank you! I think I'm really getting into the swing of things now, and though Sev is not as easy to write, I love doing his part of the chapter as much as Harry/Shadow. The magic does have an interesting side effect... Hopefully the next update won't take too long!
Title: The Use of Magic 17 Nov 2008 12:52 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank goodness - no exploding houses (or should I say no exploding houses yet?).

    Shadow speaking is bound to make things interesting - I look forward to seeing what he tells Harry.

    Author's Response: I think the 'yet' may definitely be a possibility (!) However, it may not be the Manor... Shadow should be fun to write from now on, and hopefully the next chapter won't take too long! Thanks for reviewing.
Title: The Use of Magic 17 Nov 2008 8:01 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    yay Good chapter keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank you, will do!
Title: A Slight Misunderstanding 17 Nov 2008 5:49 am
Reviewer: xj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    interesting!

    Author's Response: Good! I hope you keep enjoying!
Title: The Use of Magic 17 Nov 2008 5:34 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good...now things are progressing...

    Author's Response: Slowly but surely... Nine chapters and it's only been two days - everyone may be in for a long wait! Thanks for reviewing.

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