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Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 28 Jun 2012 6:16 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Erin. She is an interesting character. At least Harry will have someone in the neighborhood sympathetic to his plight.
Title: Chapter 6: Muggle Meets Magical 08 Apr 2012 4:44 pm
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    I wanted to read a few chapters before I reviewed because I wanted to get more of a feel of the story. And I have one word for it: AMAZING! I love Erin. She is so well developed, I like her personality and you can tell (despite only knowing him for a few days) she truly cares about Harry. I also like how you characterise Tonks. Very realistic :)
Title: Chapter 28 14 Jan 2012 1:54 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    By Grabthor's Hammer, I've never read such a riveting fic in the two years I've been reading Harry/Severus genfics on this archive. I literally could not stop reading this until I got to the end.

    Erin is an excellent OFC who doesn't descend into the irritation of Mary-Sueishness. I love how you have her standing up to Severus when he's at his worst, and while the actual number of days that they've known each other is rather short, I have known a real life couple who, due to the circumstances in which they met, snarled at each other horribly, yet, within two weeks, they'd realized that they were desperately attracted to each other. So I don't find the quickness of the development of Erin and Severus' relationship unrealistic.

    Poor Harry.... I find the string of nasty events happening around and to him rather canon, actually. It certainly seemed in the novels that anytime Harry had something good come into his life, he lost it before the end of the book--or, in the case of Ron's friendship, it was challenged by jealousy and anger for a significant amount of time before resolving and getting stronger.

    Gosh, I could go on and on about this. *grin* I have truly loved this story, and while it has been three years since it was last updated, I will continue to hope that you will return to it. I want to see Harry, Severus and Erin become a family (I did catch that bit where Erin almost admitted to herself that she wants to be Harry's mum!) even more than I want to see the end of Voldemort!

    When you decide to come back to this, please know that you've got a new dedicated reader who will be thrilled to see more of this story.

    Well done!

    (BTW, I'm a 50 year old mum of five kids, and I have to thank them for dragging me into the Potterverse back when HP and the Goblet of Fire came out. So nice to see fic written by another mum!)
Title: Chapter 28 26 Sep 2011 5:56 pm
Reviewer: The Girl in the Corner (Signed) [Report This]
    This is brilliant, I love it. :)
Title: Chapter 28 22 Jan 2010 9:38 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    It's been over a year.
    WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!?

    Author's Response:

    Oh dear! So sorry that you have had to resort to a plea. I am afraid that I stopped posting Muggle here because it generated so little interest. I am not talking reviews here, but overall readership. Also, it is a very painful process for me to upload chapters on this site because I have changed my internet provider to Mozilla Firefox and I have to copy and paste everything with them for some reason and it takes forever. I am afraid the readership is not worth the pain and effort. But if youa re still interested in the story, I still post over at fanfic.net.

     Lesley~

     

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 4: Muggle Vs Wizards 27 May 2009 1:07 am
Reviewer: halfblood (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter ... gonna mark this as a favourite and stop reading for tonight as getting eye strain from my laptop after having a marathon long reading session of your other story! will definitely come back to this thou :)
Title: Chapter 3: Severus snape,..Dark Wizard, White Knight. 27 May 2009 12:55 am
Reviewer: halfblood (Signed) [Report This]
    liking this so far... Snape will be in for a shock...

    Author's Response:

    I am so pleased that you liked ASD enough that you decided to check out my other work. I hope you enjoy it as much. I will tell you though, that I have stopped posting Muggle on this site because there was very little interest in it. The last batch of chapters were uploaded en masse by one of the administratiors that I know here, but I haven't bothered with anymore as the readership is virtually non existant.

    You can keep up to date over at fanfic.net; I still post over there. I am working on chapter 32 now. I am sorry if you are not signed up over there, but anon reviewers can review there, I just cannot reply to them. It's simple enough to sign up over there though. Perhaps you already are.

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 28 29 Apr 2009 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can't wait for more.
Title: Chapter 28 16 Jan 2009 4:59 pm
Reviewer: Lena (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wanna next chap:)
Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 14 Jan 2009 7:04 pm
Reviewer: Asterix Tutnix (Signed) [Report This]
    The Wicked WItch of the West, Gepetto and the Black Prince! This is such a good idea, loved it!

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