Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 20 12 Dec 2008 12:51 am
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just re-read the last 10 chapters up to here, which was where I managed to pause first time through - couldn't stop reading! As I'm determined to save the next big chunk to read over the Christmas break I thought it was only fair to leave a few lines to congratulate you on some great chapters.I like all the detailed descriptions you put in, and it seemed that Erin and Severus were acknowledging their attraction quite slowly, although the timescale was only a couple of days.It's also good to find a story where someone gives as good as they get in relation to S. and it makes a change that Harry, while a main character and hopefully continuing as such, is not the central focus of everything. Oh, and I love the idea of Dumbledore in lime green parrot print robes! Thank you.
Title: Chapter 28 09 Dec 2008 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapters Lesley! I really hope Harry doesn't find out about the other boys. He certainly doesn't need more guilt on his shoulders.

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Donna.

    I'm afraid that your hope as far as Harry finding out about the boys is doomed. Of course he has to find out...this is Harry. He already suspects strongly that there is something going on.

    Thans for another review.

    Lesley

     

Title: Chapter 28 09 Dec 2008 3:44 am
Reviewer: upthegrm (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I wonder who is going to crack and tell Harry what's going on first. Part of me wonders if it's going to be Hermione or if he's going to overhear Severus and Erin talking. I also like the way that Ginny is able to pick up on Harry's feelings and redirect conversations. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for writing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review. I just looked up your bio, as I usually do when a new person reviews, and I see that this is your first review. I am honoured.

    Glad you enjoyed this chapter, and I hope you have enjoyed the rest of the story as much. You will be surprised at how Harry finds out, because of course, he will. Seems like you like Harry and Ginny getting closer. I am glad...another reviewer I just responded to does not like them together.

    Hope to hear from you again.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 28 08 Dec 2008 7:33 pm
Reviewer: abby1000 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really don't like the Harry/Ginny although I love the Severus/Erin. This story would be perfect if the H/G were gone.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry you don't like Harry and Ginny because I love them. But together, they will not be a major feature of the story. Indications will show that they are becoming attracted to each other though, and I hope this will not be a major turn off for you.

    Glad that you like Sev/Erin though. Thank you for your review.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 28 07 Dec 2008 3:53 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! :D Really really cool—you can feel things building. I love it when things start building in a story I like! And I'm glad all of his friends are back and Harry's not "twelve" anymore. :D Anyway, great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for another lovely review. Glad that you are still enjoying the story.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 28 07 Dec 2008 2:16 am
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't believe it. You've stumped me again.
    I might not have a handle on the frogs yet but I think this could be one of the best fic's I have ever read. Mine does not even scratch the surface of this. Well done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your lovely compliment. I'm really glad that you're still enjoying the story. Thank you for reviewing and letting me know.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 06 Dec 2008 8:37 am
Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Is it Vernon??? Someone's raping Harry, I got that much out of it....

    Author's Response:

    Is someone raping Harry? Vernon dursley is still recuperating from the injuries he received in the car accident that killed his wife and son. And how would Vernon know where HArry was when the Dark Lord doesn't?

    I think you need to wait for the next chapter.

    Thank you for your review

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What an utterly cruel cliffhanger!!!!
    But for the rest: Thank you for the many, many new chapters all of which I liked greatly! The story is quite unique and your developement of the original character Erin is very nice and convincing! Also the interaction between the different characters is very well developed! Your Snape is in character and so is Harry, and I like the way you are making the changes in their mutual relationship believable by going slowly and certainly not straight but with ups and downs!
    Now I hope that your next update will be soon, because I was really enjoying the read and now I want to know what the hell's been happening to poor Harry again, though I have my suspicions... (the "big burly muggle with the beer gut"?!).
    Thanxs for sharing this incredible story with us!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your lovely compliments. I am so glad that you have enjoyed the sotry and the characters so far. I hope you continue to do so.

    Sorry for the cliffie. Won't be too long before the next update.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    OH MY GOD! This is an absolutely amazing story. I love how you are keeping Severus IC, but still allowing him a rational development of feeling toward Harry.

    This last chapter has been my favorite yet, what an amazing cliffie! Please update soon.

    Donna

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Donna for another lovely review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter so much.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 11 05 Dec 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Erin may be acting a little immaturely—though I can't say I'd necessarily act better under the circumstances—but I'm inclined to think our Severus deserves it. :D At any rate, I think it's good for him!

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