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Title: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship 12 Apr 2009 1:01 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    love it! Love it! Hooray for Severus reassuring Harry! :) What a wonderful chapter. i'm so glad that Harry recognized the warning signs of an attack and was able to use his applicator. That's great progress! Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it! Yes, Harry, is learning! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship 11 Apr 2009 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter because of the bonding that happens between Harry and Severus. I am sure over the years that Harry and Severus will come to blows over different subjects but he will be secure in the knowledge that he is loved and cared for no matter what happens. Harry deserves to be happy with a family that will love and care for him.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship 11 Apr 2009 7:02 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    It wasn't as fluffy as you implied, in my opinion. Great update! I like how holidays, no matter how small, encourage authors to update! Severus is such a great character!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you think it wasn't too fluffy. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 25 – End of the Guardianship 11 Apr 2009 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that chapter warms the cockles of my heart. (Always wondered what cockles were, but they are definitely warm now!)

    That was lovely and warm and toasty! Uh, ok so that's my breakfast, but this chapter was great too! :)

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 24 – The Shopping 10 Apr 2009 8:52 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter... I love Ivy. Ron is so annoying, sometimes.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like the chapter and love Ivy. :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 24 – The Shopping 08 Apr 2009 2:18 am
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this chapter, loved how the guys enteracted. Loved that Harry trusted Severus enough to fall asleep and be okay. I think that there is still that steel in him if he needs it. Love your story can't wait for you up dates.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad that you like the story! Reviewers like you encourage me to write more and more! :) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 24 – The Shopping 06 Apr 2009 7:40 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent fic! At first, I wasn't sure that I would like this fic because the speech was too formal as compared to the books but the story line is just excellent. I don't know how I never found this fic before!

    Author's Response: Many people tell me that they first didn't know if they would like the fic, but then changed their opinion. I'm glad you like it as well. :) The speech problem is because I'm not a native Englsh speaker. I only had 5 years of English classes in school.
Title: Chapter 24 – The Shopping 06 Apr 2009 2:43 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry..he had an eventful trip alright xxx

    More soon please xx

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 24 – The Shopping 06 Apr 2009 2:11 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Harry! What an embarrassing end to the day, but I am so glad that he has people around him that will help him, and care for him. That is wonderful.

    Thank you so much for the updates and for continuing the story. I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: I don't plan to stop writing!!!! My real life is just stressful, and so I hardly have time and energy to write. I have plenty of plot for this story, and so their is no risk of a quick end. My beta also needs at least a week to correct it and so the longer waiting time happens. I'm glad you are still reading!
Title: Chapter 24 – The Shopping 06 Apr 2009 12:35 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry. How embarrassing!

    Great chapter. I loved the shopping trip and I'm glad that Severus is there for Harry when he loses control.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it! Thank you very much for your review!

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