Reviews For Harry and His New Family
| Title: Chapter 2 - No Sleep Found | 23 Dec 2008 11:20 pm |
| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) | [Report This] |
- Great chapter. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: There will come more. I just have to wait for my beta to correct my chapters!
| Title: Chapter 2 - No Sleep Found | 23 Dec 2008 11:07 pm |
| Reviewer: Angelauthor14 (Anonymous) | [Report This] |
- Loved the last line! Can't wait for the next chapter, I am really enjoying this so far.
Author's Response: :D I just have to wait for my beta to correct the next chpater and than I will upload it here!
| Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train | 21 Dec 2008 9:24 pm |
| Reviewer: Angelauthor14 (Anonymous) | [Report This] |
- This is looking really promising! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train | 20 Dec 2008 10:48 pm |
| Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) | [Report This] |
- I like how your story is turning out. Don't worry about English not being your mother tongue. You have written better then some people that are english speaking.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
| Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train | 20 Dec 2008 6:56 pm |
| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) | [Report This] |
- Very good!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train | 20 Dec 2008 6:09 am |
| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) | [Report This] |
- Nice beginning. I'm anxious to find out what happens next.
Poor Harry, I hope Snape and his wife give him the family that Harry wishes for.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I already have written two more chapters. One I submitted right now and only has to be validate by the staff here and another one that is still waiting be be corrected by my beta.
| Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train | 20 Dec 2008 5:49 am |
| Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) | [Report This] |
- Oh, poor Harry. i hope Sev finds out soon!
-Elise
Author's Response:
He already is suspecious and will confront Harry in the third chapter.
Thanks for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train | 20 Dec 2008 4:38 am |
| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) | [Report This] |
- Good start, am looking forward to more! Have a happy holiday!
Author's Response:
I also wish you a happy holiday. Thanks for your review! I already have written two more chapters. One I submitted right now and only has to be validate by the staff here and another one that is still waiting to be corrected by my beta.