| Title: The Road Ahead
| 15 Jul 2007 4:02 pm
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| Reviewer: tsugath (Anonymous)
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This is an awesome story. I couldn't stop reading until it was done. Kudos!
| Title: The Road Ahead
| 06 Jun 2007 2:48 pm
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| Reviewer: shiying (Anonymous)
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brilliant story! very well done :)
| Title: The Road Ahead
| 28 May 2007 1:58 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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As I mentioned in a previous review, the story is well planned and has a great plot. With a bit of work it could be great.
| Title: Pink Butterfly
| 27 May 2007 6:17 am
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| Reviewer: Louisa (Anonymous)
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I'm only mid way through the story, but I feel I must pause and comment. First, I love the concept and the pace. The story so far has a great plot and is very intriguing. My only complaints are... first, you need a beta, the errors are distracting and for me to say that, they have to be obvious. There are a lot of spelling errors not to mention the, sometimes, confusing punctuation. I'm by no means a perfectionist when it comes to stories having to be professional quality, but just a second set of eyes could help in this.
The second is the fact that you have Ron and Harry not present when each of them dress... this shows not only your gender but also your age. Even JKR has them dressing in the same room! Boys are not near as modest when it comes to 'nakedness' as girls are. When you gain a few years of experience you'll realize this! The first time it was amusing, now it just makes me want to pat you on the head and tell you things will change when you grow up and spend time with a man.
But over all the story, thus far, is good but with a few minor changes it could be great!
~Louisa
I have a simple question...
I have read many fics and have all of them confused. I am looking for one fic though and I am hoping this maybe it.
Does Harry sing Killing in the name of by rage against the machine in this story?
Please let me know as I have been looking for the fic for what seems to be years. My email ailishmckechnie@y...ca
Gorgeous! Thank you for writing this story.
| Title: A Welcome Return
| 08 Feb 2007 8:58 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous)
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Alrister's story was very enthralling! I am not sure if you noticed, but McGonagall calls Harry "Potter" in literally almost every sentence she speaks, above.
-K
| Title: The Guardian of Hogwarts
| 08 Feb 2007 4:07 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous)
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I continue to enjoy this story. :)
I have to say this was a bit much all at once. Peeves being the guardian is great - but we hear way too much new information in this chapter, and Peeves/Peter doesn't stay very consistent in his reactions.
-K
| Title: Why Ravenclaw is Proud
| 08 Feb 2007 3:53 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous)
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Bwa ha ha! This was a great, rousing chapter.
Where'd you get 'Cimicifuga' from? That's the genus name for black cohosh. Does it mean to repeat something, in Latin?
-K
| Title: Merry Christmas, Professor
| 08 Feb 2007 3:10 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous)
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Hi! I decided to continue following the story here rather than at fanfiction-dot-net. It sucks that someone rated one of these chapters as a 1 and a 2 because they didn't see the Snape/Harry interaction that they wanted to. It makes me want to blow them a raspberry.
This fic continues to be interesting. I am enjoying the evil poisons listed here. Wow! That's some creative nastiness, there. And I can't help but continue to wonder who Harry's other protector is; Alistair? Hmm.
-K
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