Very nice ending to the year. You juggled a lot of elements and brought them together well. It was great that Harry was able to get rid of the curse that James had placed on Severus.
I forgot to mention in the previous chapter what a great job you are doing pulling together all the elements of this story. The oppsipots (or whatever they were) came through!
Whew, what a ride. And it's a good thing you didn't kill Draco. I would have had to hunt you down. ;-)
very touching and insightful.
"The relaxed, warm atmosphere at Hogwarts carried all the way through the rest of the month, to when Professor Flitwick’s “Weird Sisters” calendar proclaimed that it was June, and time to book your Weird Sisters Christmas Concert tickets."
Cute detail.
And then the chapter got really tense.
Interesting turn of events. Nice idea of having the mark moved to different places on the body.
Oh, sad, sad, sad. And you still have me going on what the whole purpose the poisoning is unless it's just to keep everyone weak from lack of food.
I bet you had fun writing that. I haven't commmented before on how much I enjoyed the continuing theme of Draco's extreme nervousness before matches as he hunts madly for things in plain view.
Nice job with something that could have been really maudlin. I really like Draco in this story. I hope that he gets some healing.
Hagrid was absolutely splendid in this. CAlling himself Kibble's "mommy" and talking Norbert and being a grandpa. Sinistra was subtly creepy and I'll look forward to seeing her again.
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