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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Phoenix's Flight
Yay! I loved this chappie! I read about Harry hexing the Dursley's with a great big grin on my face. I got very excited when Harry was receiving his birthday presents too, my birthday is in a few days, but because I'll be 24 (A so called 'grown up'), I don't get presents anymore, just money in a card - which is nice n all, don't get me wrong, but I miss the suprise and excitement of unwrapping a gift, so I really enjoyed living through Harry in this chappie! x
Mmmph, you made me cry with this one *sniff*. Poor Sirius *sniff* poor Harry *sniff*. Remus saying goodbye to Siries broke my heart.
Hi! Ok, so here's the thing - I read a lot of fanfiction. I mean A LOT. But I NEVER review. Usually because I only read completed fics, so I didn't really see the point (I think of reviews as encouragement for the author to finish the fic, what's the point if they're already finished, right?). But then I read your notes at the beginning of this chapter and now I feel bad :-( So I vowed to make up for it. From now on I'm gonna review every fic I read, and since I liked this first chappie of this so much, I'm gonna review each and every chappie of each and every (completed) fic you've written! er....I don't really know what to say.......reviewing is weird for me! I really liked this chappie, it flows nicely. It doesn't bore the reader, but doesn't have too much going on either (I hate reading stories that go into too much plot at first). Very nice. By the way: - It got quite confusing sometimes to hear Aunt Petunia having a conversion with Uncle Vernon about the boy and that kind, performing you-know-what at that place, with all those people and "that horrible man" invading their house on every you-know-what-day. - I loved that! Hee hee! x
I love your story it was absolutely wonderful:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:) Bye for now:)
I apologize for doubting you!!! I obviously misunderstood with the Alrister/Alistair thingy. I assumed, and I shouldn't have done that. I'm sorry. Forgive a humble reader? I hope so. I loved the defenses of the school, by the way! Kristen
I've been reading your fic for the last hour or so, and I have been enjoying it a lot. It is very well written. :) Something just occured to me though...in PoA, didn't Severus use Expelliarmus and catch Harry, Ron and Hermione's wands? It's not a big deal or anything, your story works well with this "situation" of Snape's. I was just wondering if this was going to be explained or if I should just ignore it and enjoy the story??? Anyway, keep up the good work, you've made me smile today, and I had a MIDTERM!! Do you know how rare that is? Congrats, and cheers!
I loved this story! You written it very well, and your take on the Snape as guardian was different! Also, gotta love peeves in this!
The story is very good and it is very well-written. However, I have a small question for OWL results. Why was Lupin listed as the tutor for DA, when in book five it was Umbridge. Overall, I am very much enjoying your writing.
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