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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Phoenix's Flight
OMG That was the COOLEST story!!! You had some nice pacing, and great description, and it was full of emotion!!!!! *gushes* It was just great! I enjoyed every second and hope there is a sequel planned if not already in progress :) Blessings, Vana
I'm really beginning to wonder why this is posted at Potions&Snitches. I'm not seeing any positive interaction between Harry and Snape, especially 14 chapters in. This may be gen, but the "mentoring" aspect that is listed as the category is totally missing from this story. Why is it here?
wonderful story, at first when it looked like draco had died i swear that i was going to send an angry review but then he was allive and all was well, oh well. this was a wonderful story writen quite elequently, i saw a few verb tense mistakes, but it wasnt bad at all and not rampant. well i know that this story deserves more of a review but im hungry. well best of luck! ~~Kira
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