this is so absolutely perfect!! i love how Snape is behaving so typically and the way Dumbledore is so manipulative. Even better than J.k. herself!! you made me laugh all the way through the story! wow, i need a sequel! where is the sequel, by the way??
| Title: Chapter 8; Home Sweet Home
| 30 Dec 2010 5:31 am
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can't wait to read a sequal
hah ha poor Snape he is always victim to that grin and look from Dumbldore and mostly Mcgonagall follows suit.
love the cat comment from snape
| Title: Chapter 6: Hogwarts Infirmary
| 30 Dec 2010 5:11 am
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wow i can so seee the scenes playing out starting iwth the talking of the adults and the anger from poppy and McGonagall as well as Sevuras although he will never admit it.
but also Harry and how sacared he is and Severus' reaction to that
| Title: D for Dursley Interlude
| 30 Dec 2010 5:03 am
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i think this chapter was very well done and in character loved McGonagall as she getss pissed she is relaly pissed and you showed that well
you also have dumbldore down well even to the i have my memories thank you part
"Madam Pomfrey shook her head. 'I would love to but I’m afraid I cannot. I am a nurse, not a mother.'"
Heh. That's no better a defense than Severus', and he even said she'd take him if no one else would. I know this is a Severitus/Sevitus site, but I think she ought to take him anyway.
Agreed. Not a very well-written chapter. I'm keeping on to see how the next one is, though.
"Wait... WHAT?"
*giggle*
I can't see the date this was posted from inside the story, but I'm assuming a while ago, since you make no mention of Severus & Lily's relationship at all.
Oh, so that's how you got Severus down to Surrey. Ingenious. But it's "donning garments" not "dawning" them.
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