| Title: Chapter 5: Something Startling
| 17 Jun 2009 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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Great:) I loved it, thanks a lot!
| Title: Chapter 5: Something Startling
| 17 Jun 2009 6:43 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed)
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this fic is very well written and keep going as your writing is fantastic.
i did keep expecting postman pat to wander in
| Title: Chapter 5: Something Startling
| 17 Jun 2009 5:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Great story! I am enjoying the realistic portrayal of Severus as very harsh, but not totally heartless.
| Title: Chapter 5: Something Startling
| 17 Jun 2009 5:43 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, Poor Harry. I'm glad that they know that he's being abused now.
Great start. I'm looking forward to more.
Great update! Poor little Harry, seems Sev and Poppy figured things out. I wonder how the trip to the Durselys went for Dumbledore and McGonagall? Perhaps they had their own enlightening, and will decide not to have Harry return there. I can only hope!
Until next chapter :)
Certainly a twist on the "Dumbles and Snape see the Dursleys"! And for some odd reason “Why don’t you feel his head?” had me in stitches.
| Title: Chapter 4: Arrival at Hogwarts
| 14 Jun 2009 11:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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wow. loved it. can not wait for the next part of the story.
| Title: Chapter 4: Arrival at Hogwarts
| 14 Jun 2009 12:13 am
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| Reviewer: jvalread (Signed)
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At the end of your first chapter you asked if we thought this was cliched or not, I have to say I don't think so. Sure there have been other stories where the Dursley's abandoned Harry, usually somewhere in London, but so far this one is original. I can't wait for POppy to find out about the abuse, and I'm sure that Dumbles will use Legillamancy against the Dursley's - probably not on purpose, but they'll be projecting or something :-)
| Title: Chapter 4: Arrival at Hogwarts
| 12 Jun 2009 8:51 am
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| Reviewer: Marylou (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating, great chapie!
Cant wait for more, persones are very good in character!
Hehe, Severus sure sounds flustered! His attempt at leaving Harry failed miserably, and now he's got another task to do :)
Poor Harry, hope he isn't too sick. I'm curious about how the trip to the Durselys will go and hope the truth will be revealed! Harry just CAN'T go back to those creeps!
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