Either Harry's gonna end up worked ragged or he's gonna give up on his revenge. I don't really see the latter happening, however...
Dude, I could so use some of that salve, sometimes.
Awesome chap.
Poor guy. Having some of the only control he in his life stripped away must be really hard. I think you portrayed his possible response to everything very well.
"Oops," indeed. LOL
I really like your Poppy. ^^
Liked the whole evasion - kid knows how to run, though, he'd certainly need to know how. *frown* Loved Harry's response to Snape's howler: “He cheated." ^^
Really great chapter! Well written, too. Can't wait to read what happens next.
He did that, alright!
Couldn't help but feel a little bit of sympathy for poor Severus, though. I mean, sheesh, *I* was wincing, and Dumbledore wasn't even talking to me!
Great chapter. ^^
Interesting... Already we've a glimpse of how Harry's home life may have influenced the way he conducts himself.
A great start - I like it!
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| 11 Aug 2010 1:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Ilaria (Anonymous)
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I have this big, dorky grin on my face. That was brilliant.
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| 09 Aug 2010 10:51 am
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| Reviewer: Nazgurl (Anonymous)
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Perfect ending. Thank you for this WONDERFUL story. It really was a joy, start to end.
*wibbles* That - was - such a BEAUTIFUL chapter. Thank you so much for writing it - I look forward to whatever you have planned for the end, but believe me I am so sad this is ending!
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| 04 Aug 2010 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Nah, there has to be a sequal
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