I like it. The only thing I would change is having two versions of the same events. Really we only needed to see the one version of the hospital wing instead of having two separated pieces of Harry and Snape's perspectives. You can blend them together into once scene.
I like your story a lot!
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| 01 Aug 2010 11:23 am
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ok, that was such a huge intake of pure undiluted CUTENESS that it'll take me hours to process it. i even have the stupid grin plastered on my face and all :D
| Title: His Child
| 28 Jul 2010 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: anony (Anonymous)
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You have a BEAUTIFUL story right here - I'm sorry to see it end!!! Definitely on my top5 list of best fanfics ever written!
Wonderful, wonderful chapter; the conversation between Severus and Harry was so heartbreakingly cute I almost cried :)
| Title: His Child
| 27 Jul 2010 6:15 pm
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| Reviewer: kia (Anonymous)
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| Title: His Child
| 27 Jul 2010 12:26 pm
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| Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous)
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)))))))))))))))DDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!T-T
*sniffle sniffle* *happy tears*
This was just PERFECT! Thank you so much for writing this. It was totally believable and wonderful and fulfilled the promise of all the other chapters. Can't wait to see the epilogue!
WELL DONE!
Sniff....
I've been enjoying this fic and I'll be a bit sad to see it end. This was the kind of end I wanted for canon Harry and Severus but... ah, well. That's why I read fanfiction.
Oh, vinettes from the future? How about when Harry decides to play with a huge snake? Or if Harry finds the diary after Ginny tosses it, will he show it to Snape?
Or imagine Snape's reaction when Harry's name comes out of the Goblet.
THIS IS ONLY THE BEST THING EVER.
Oneshot ideas:
Harry flashbacks again, which freaks out Snape
Something involving Star Trek!
Anything involving Blaise
CHRISTMAS
Harry's birthday!
PSYCHO KITTY (who...disappeared?)
PSYCHO KITTY and Crookshanks! And Snape. That wasnt even a coherent sentence. Uhm. I think 4am is a respectable time to go to bed, dont you? I shall do that then. Good night!
| Title: His Child
| 26 Jul 2010 3:53 am
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| Reviewer: Someoneoutthere (Anonymous)
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