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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Damn that Hat! 19 Nov 2009 8:13 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice start! on to the next one!

    Author's Response: Yey!! New reader!! Hope you like!!
Title: Oops? 19 Nov 2009 6:18 am
Reviewer: Zophia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "ummm...oops?" That was brilliant! I found myself smiling broadly too, despite the fact that what Harry has had to endure is terrible. I like how you manage to mix the characters thoughts with action. Congratulations for a wisely-build and paced chapter.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! And wonderful to hear from you!! Rhiannan
Title: An Independent Evil 18 Nov 2009 3:41 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    i want another update!!! YAY!

    Author's Response: LOL I'll work on it! I've got exams and stuff coming up again, though...
Title: An Independent Evil 18 Nov 2009 2:42 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yeah, that was fun! You write these characters so sharply and crisply. I have a difficult time seeing Ron and Hermione so comfortable in Slytherin and I think, without Harry, they couldn't be. He's the glue for the whole group?

    Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I suppose Harry is the 'glue'. Certainly Ron and Hermione wouldn't be hanging out in Slytherin without him. The ties seem to be forming around him, too, though. Thanks again for the review! Rhiannan
Title: An Independent Evil 18 Nov 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Though I am a little confused by the last bit of Blaise and Severus' interchange...

    Suddenly something occurred to Blaise. “You did not survive in the Dark Lord's ranks by being an idiot. You already knew.”

    “Your warning does not cause me any additional stress.”

    Blaise smirked. “That was a yes.”

    Snape's face stayed neutral. “As you like.”

    Exactly what did Severus already know? I am a bit lost.

    Harry lowering his defences enough to show the photos to his friends was great to see. And finally letting the words 'my mother' pass his lips was heartwarming. In fact Harry in this chapter was finally much more s oft around the edges; even with his friends he is more often than not defensive.

    I felt very upset for Severus during his conversation with Albus. He really does not seem to care for Severus' peace of mind at all. I suppose his thinking is more that he would rather keep Severus alive is valid, but that just seems to be for Harry's sake. Why can't the Order know? It is not as if they are going to go around and shout it from the rooftops. They are nearly as covert in their activities as the DEs are, so they will keep all their cards close to their chests.

    I am disappointed in Albus.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Severus already knew that he was in danger, is all. Blaise is bright, but Snape's smarter. He knows exactly what the risks are, and, better than Blaise, exactly WHO is dangerous and how. About the Order- Albus has always claimed that Snape is innocent to the Order, they just haven't believed it because of his DE connections and past. They won't believe until he publicly denounces the Dark Lord, which Albus has just ordered him not to do. Therefore, Snape's DE friends will know long before the Order does that Snape is not a Death Eater, unless the Order obtains the same information, and comes to the same conclusions, as the Death Eaters. Naturally, this pisses Snape off, but primarily because his life is less important to him than perhaps it is to Albus. Hope that clears things up, and I'll try to figure out a way to make it more clear in the text. Thanks! I love your long reviews. :0) Rhiannan
Title: An Independent Evil 18 Nov 2009 12:29 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much I love this story they are so good together especially Theo and Blaise and Hermione are well matched in brains. Severus will be grey at the end of the year thank you

    Author's Response: LOL yeah poor Sev. How he hasn't had an aneurism or something yet is beyond me. I guess he's used to stress. :0) Thanks so much for the review!! It's wonderful to hear that you like my fic. Rhiannan
Title: An Independent Evil 17 Nov 2009 7:44 pm
Reviewer: SiriusLives (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm truly enjoying this story. I find it so different from others that I've read and it's great to read something 'new'. Your characters are wonderful and very well depicted. I do love Severus in this.

    Author's Response: *smile* Thanks!! Glad you like it. Sometimes I feel like my story's been done a thousand times before, so it's nice to hear that you find it unique. :0)
Title: An Independent Evil 17 Nov 2009 6:55 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Severus doesn't have to spy anymore!!! But I feel sorry for him that it won't be made public. Harry with the pictures was sweet and kinda sad. I can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked!! I'll work on getting the next bit out in a prompt fashion, but no promises - I've got a short break in a week, but until then, and then after then, my life is dead crazy. Once Winter break starts I'll have more time. :0) Thanks for the review!!!
Title: An Independent Evil 17 Nov 2009 4:55 pm
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yay! Another chapter, and just in time to distract me from my english paper! Poor Snape, he is always getting the rough end of the deal...I hope Harry eventually realizes how thick he has been! I can't wait to see what happens next!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! And I'll momentarily pretend to be sorry about your English paper...sorry. LOL everybody knows fanfiction is more worthwhile than school. (Or at least I better believe it, considering how much it interferes with MY work!) And yeah, Snape's life has never been the easiest. Some of that's his fault, but still...
Title: An Independent Evil 17 Nov 2009 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    As always, it's great to see a new chapter for this story. The best part of this section is the Blaise/Snape dialogue. It's facinating to watch the smart child/smarter adult dynamic.

    P.S. "Youngling"? Really? Who says that? (Yes, I get the Star Wars ref.-- I didn't like it much there either. Too redundant.)

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you liked. And lol on the youngling. Thanks for pointing that out - I meant youngster, and changed it, though I still think that's not the greatest choice. I'll think on it. The Star Wars ref was unintentional - I think I've just read too much fantasy and sci-fi. Thanks for the review, and the help! Rhiannan

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