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Title: Slythindors 21 Aug 2009 8:14 am
Reviewer: Slythindors (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like your story thus far. Hopefully we don't have to wait so long for the next chapter. It was hard having to wait. Keep p the good work.

    Author's Response: YEY! Glad you liked it! I'll do my best on the next chapter, but as I'm unwilling to rush it and I'm gonna be kinda busy, I can't promise anything. I do have some good ideas, though. :0)
Title: Slythindors 21 Aug 2009 6:47 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh! that was a really good chapter. I liked the mcdonall's style play place!

    Author's Response: Heehee glad you liked it. This chapter really made me want a room of requirement. I mean, could you imagine having a living room that happily became a ball pit that could then be a grove of trees?? Freakin' AWESOME, man!!! lol.
Title: Slythindors 21 Aug 2009 3:09 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love Theo's semicircles making circles making figure-eights making butterflys thing. That was funny. I liked the ball pit too. Those are fun. Thanks for the update and the warning about the wait time for the next chapter. I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: :-) LOL glad YOU appreciate the warning. I'm getting flack from other people (*cough cough TARYN cough cough*) Anyway thanks for the review, and glad you liked it. :-)
Title: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009 11:34 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, fun! I so loved the session with McGonagall!

    Author's Response: Yey!!! Glad it was fun!!! :0)
Title: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009 11:05 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    WONDERFUL! Theo is highly amusing. And I LOVED Harry & friends playing and his "lesson" with McGonagall. Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked it!!! :0)
Title: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    "I'm going to warn you ahead of time that the next one will, too."

    What. WHAT. -flail- because of this, I'm not going to give you a Full Review for an entire...day. HA.

    anyhow, in mind of my limited space of time, Hermione at the beginning was very Hermione-y. Also you should name the next chapter 'Gryfferins' 'cause that's so cool.

    Author's Response: LOL sorry. I'll do my best to get the chapter up when I get a chance, but I can't promise anything. Hence the warning. I'll keep Gryfferins in mind. I name chapters based on what's actually in the text, so it has to have context, but I will see. :-) Thanks for the review! (Even if it was a bit vindictive.)
Title: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, great chapter as usual. Harry is quite the powerful wizard isn't he?

    I love that Harry is starting slowly to see Snape as more than just someone who tells him what to do,even if he needs a little push to see it. I'm just worried though that if Snape does eventually use corporal punishment on Harry, that the trust that they're beginning to develop will be broken, since Harry's abuse was so severe.

    Good luck with school, and I hope that you settle in nicely.

    Can't wait to read more of Harry saying "anything"!

    Author's Response: Thanks!! No worries - I agree with you about the CP thing, and am working on it. (If it happens, it'll be when both characters are good and ready, trust me.) Thanks for your good wishes- I leave today for school, and am really excited to see my friends again. LOL Harry's tongue unleashed!! :0) Thanks for the review.
Title: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009 4:54 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great chapter-- I'm sure the next one will be worth the wait, too. Harry still has a lot of attitude, but everyone around him seems to now understand the situation and are helping accordingly (yay!). I love it.

    Author's Response: YAY!! Glad you like it!! I, too, am glad that things seem to be settling down a bit. (We'll have to see how the sessions with Snape go, though...) :-)
Title: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009 4:48 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was always surprised that the muggleborn or muggle raised students never did bring muggle pens, pencils and paper with them. You would have thought that to take notes and such using a notebook and pen would have been easier.

    Author's Response: EXACTLY!! I was like, dude, quills DRIP, inkwells SPILL, and parchment is EXPENSIVE. Get out of the dark ages already, peoples!! Did you know that parchment is a type of prepared, stretched, animal skin? (Generally sheep or goat). The stuff is REALLY expensive, and gets eaten by everything under the sun. Totally impractical. LOL excuse my rant. Thanks for reviewing! :-)
Title: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009 2:01 pm
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry. I'm soooo sorry, I was loveing the story and then near the end I was jurked out of the story by one word. one anoying, word. my pet hate; you called it a blooming samosa, it seems petty I know but please please pleeeease would you call it a term, in england we have three terms a year with a half term holiday in the middle of each one, (allthough they dont seem to have them at hogwarts, at bording schools they useualy have a visiting day on half term and the childrens familys can take them out to places.) I dont suppose you could tell me how semesters work where you are, (I would like to assume someplace in america but I could be wrong) I love this story and I am impressed with the way you are progressing the charicters and there relationships wiht each other. I am eagaly awaiting your next chapter.

    yours

    Mica

    Author's Response: LOL no problem - I fixed it. I totally understand your difficulty - word choice is a real big one for me, too, so I totally appreciate your comment. The term 'semester' was most natural to me, because Hogwarts' term schedule is quite similar to the college semester system in the US - we (generally)have 2 semesters - fall and spring - with long breaks on either side - winter and summer. We also have shorter breaks in between for things like Thanksgiving. For example, my school's (Swarthmore's) fall term starts in September and goes until mid-December, and spring term starts in mid-January and goes until late May. We therefore get a month off at Xmas and 3 months off in the summer. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and hope you continue to enjoy as I go along. :-)

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