Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Anger and Fear 27 Jun 2009 10:14 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    YOU'RE SO AMAZING, HERE, I'LL GIVE YOU MORE BUTTERSCOTCHES.

    And..this pencil with no lead if you update soon? -pleading look-

    I think I'll read this chapter again instead of reviewing.

    Author's Response: LOL I like my imaginary butterscotches. I should post a sign: 'Will work for imaginary candies and pencils.' Thanks for your continued reviews (and butterscotches)!! Rhiannan
Title: Anger and Fear 27 Jun 2009 4:50 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    .... Woah. That was... intense, to say the least.
    *blink, blink*
    I... don't know what to say.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you said something anyway!! :-P
Title: Anger and Fear 26 Jun 2009 5:24 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Severus lol, I wouldnt want to be on the wrong side of Minerva!

    Author's Response: Yeah especially when one of her Lions (or pseudo-Lions) is involved! LOL Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Anger and Fear 26 Jun 2009 6:28 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sure it was tough to write, but you did a masterful job of it.

    Bravo.
    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what Molly will say to Ron? or do to him?

    It was nice to see Minerva and Severus trying to help Harry together and I think Sev has finally gotten a clue that it's not him personally Harry is scared of, but what he is . . .a man. And more importantly, a man of authority. Harry doesn't have a good frame of reference towards authoritative males given what he went through.

    Hopefully that will change.

    Author's Response: :-) We'll see. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: A Dog, a Cat, a Harpy, a Bat, a Friend, and a Freak 25 Jun 2009 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Macbeth of course! The witches and the potion were a dead giveaway, and 12th Night, another of my favorites. I love how Severus is handling Harry and trying to make him think better of himself. Pranks for Flint, how about turning his head into a donkey's like Apollo did King Midas in the Greek myths? Only he gave him an ass's ears.

    I approve your choice of Shakespeare plays as a former English teacher. One of my original novels is actually set in that time period and features the Bard himself and a young runaway girl who hides herself from her abusive husband in his theater company.

    I wonder why they don;t do plays at Hogwarts? Think of the cool special effects. Sinistra's just awful too! Why is she like that?

    Author's Response: Huh, how did I miss responding to this? You're right on both counts for the plays, of course. 12th night is my personal favorite. I don't actually like Macbeth all that much - I prefer Hamlet and the Taming of the Shrew. Some people thought it a little unrealistic that I have an eleven-year-old reading Shakespeare, but then I managed as a kid. It just takes a certain patience and willingness to work to figure out the language. They really should do plays at Hogwarts. That would be beyond fun. Sinestra's attitude will (probably) be explained at some point. Mostly, I think, she's just a bitch. lol thanks for reviewing!!
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw that was so sweet. Aw, I know it has to be a slow process, but I'm so looking forward to the day, where Harry really places his trust in Severus. Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it. :-) Working on the next already. It's a little tough 'cause nothing happens in canon in the month of October before Halloween, so it might be slow. Things between Harry and Sev should be okay now, though. (I hope. It all depends on Harry, of course.)
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 7:09 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay!!! Somehow I missed your last update, too, so I got two chapters. It was very exciting. Thank you!! Please update soon, this story rocks my world!!! And Harry is really starting to come around, I love it.

    Author's Response: :-) Glad you like it. Working on the next. I've run out of canon, so updates will probably come a little slower for awhile. Thanks for reviewing!! :-)
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 6:27 pm
Reviewer: frostedmidnight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay, another chapter! I can't wait to see where this goes now that Harry is finally starting to trust Severus somewhat..Poor Ron. He deserved punishment but.... I wouldn't want to be sent to an angry Mrs. Weasley either...ouch...I hope he and Harry don't fight for to long!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! I'm glad you like it! Yeah I feel bad for Ron, too. The whole weekend?! But that's what Molly said and I follow her lead. lol
Title: Anger and Fear 25 Jun 2009 4:18 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a *great* chapter. If it's short, it's hard to tell subjectively because it's such an emotional roller coaster. Chapters are like paragraphs: they should end when they're done, long or short doesn't matter. I continue to love Harry's inner monologue-- very realistic (as well as heartbreaking). The dialogue in this chapter is excellent-- both the fight between the kids and the adult arguement.

    I was surprised by McGonagal's slap...I'm not saying it was wrong...but it was a bit much between long-term colleagues. But it did add some drama to the scene and seemed to illustrate for Harry Snape's forbearance and remorse.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Yeah I just felt like McGonagall was pissed off enough to hit Sev. I think of them as more than colleagues - they are both in the Order, for example, so they know each other quite well in various contexts. W/e thanks for reviewing!!

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