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Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 10:59 pm
Reviewer: catie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you know, I started reading this story out of boredom, but after the first chapter I was hooked, it's a very diferent Harry from the ones I've read, and let me tell you that I love it. This chapter in particular made my day.
    So thanks for a great story.
    Cheers!

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm so glad you decided to read it!
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 8:51 pm
Reviewer: MissD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww...how sweet. I'm wiping tears from my eyes as I type this. I'm such a softy. So glad Kallie is back on Harry's side.

    Loved Snape in this chapter and the prank war contest is incredibly amusing and such a well deserved revenge for Flint, especially since Snape can't give it to him like he deserves.

    I love this fic...have I mentioned this before lol. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: :-) Glad you like it. Working on more as we speak. (Well, actually, I'm responding to a nice review, but the next chapter is started. lol. )
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape's approach to Flint-- I'm surprized he pushed offical channels so far, the unofficial ones are looking to be much more effective. It's also nice to see the twins' energies focused on a cause; they're effective, why not harness them? Harry seems to be changing slowly, which is great (he doesn't seem irrationally stubborn or too quick to alter his outlook). The part with Kallie at the end was quite sweet. I like her toughness juxtiposed with her vulnerability-- she's a better version of Winky, really.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I suspect the twins do, too. :-) Snape does *try* to keep in Dumbledore and the Ministry's good graces...but when official channels fail, he's got free reign. I'm also glad you like Kallie - she was my first truly original character - Theo and Blaise are different than in canon but at least they EXIST.
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol I love what Severus has initiated with the Gryffindors and Slytherins! I just love the way he looks after Harry, what a perfect way to get rid of Flint.
    Im glad that Harry sorted it out with Kallie too, such a cute little present he got for her :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!! So glad you like it. Yeah, part of me feels sorta bad for Flint (a very small part)...he'll get out of there quick if he knows what's good for him.
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 1:56 pm
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry. I'm amazed his anxiety isn't manifesting itself in nightmares or sleepwalking. My little brother does that when he's just had too much happen to him in a short time. Harry seems ready to crawl out of his skin with everything that is going on. I do like the lines. Repetition is the only thing that will start teaching Harry what he needs to know. I eagerly await your next installment.

    Author's Response: :-) Interesting, about your brother. I had times in my life when I felt 'ready to crawl out of my skin', and didn't sleep walk. I guess some people do, some don't. I'm glad you like the lines. It sorta seems like Snape's style of 'talking'.
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 12:59 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I love the ending. Hell, I loved the whole chapter. Of course I love the whole story.

    I'm so glad that Harry is finally able to see that Snape means him no harm, and he's finally coming around to be less frightened of him.

    I really can't wait until Harry begins to trust him more, and allows the man to help him.

    Will Harry have to go back to the Dursleys in the summer, now that Snape knows about the abuse. I really hope not.

    I hope that Snape's gesture with Flint help makes Harry feel more cared for and safe. Imagine so many people willing to stand up for him. He's gotta be starting to feel that he's cared for by many people now.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like t. Of course I can't tell you what's going to happen...largely 'cause I don't know. :-)
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 11:18 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus raised his voice. “Are you illiterate, or was the potion not supposed to be pale yellow at this stage, gentlemen?”

    “It was. This is prettier, though, sir.” This little interaction made me choke with laughter.

    Macus Flint is toast. I think he will be very happy to leave Hogwarts...hoepfully, he will be able to do it under his own steam.

    Harry's thoughts whilst standing in the corner were not as negative as they once were. But confusion has taken over. I am sure he will get it soon though..and trust in it.

    Harry's present to Kallie was inspired. Very, very clever.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: LOL I liked writing the twins in this chapter. They were fun. __________Hmm...on Marcus Flint, hopefully for you or hopefully for Flint? I'm sure it would be better for HIM to leave while he can still walk, but for me...hmmm. :-) _______ Thanks!!! Rhiannan
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 6:55 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! I love Kallie! She's so sweet! Severus is so clever. Poor Harry, he's sorta figuring things out, but he's still confused. *huggles Harry and then runs away so he can't complain*

    Author's Response: LOL. I'm glad you like them.
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 5:09 am
Reviewer: honourary_weasley (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Sweetest present ever! I still think it's amusing that Snape makes Harry stand in the corner all the time - I know Harry hates talking, but I like talking... *hint hint* still, little bits are coming out nicely now.

    Snape and the twins was hysterical, as was his awarding ridiculous points in his class. Your twins are great! I love words like 'indubitably'; they most assuredly steal those from Percy, McGonagall and Snape, cos after all, they are always getting told off!

    Can't wait to see what the other professors make of Snape's scheme - and the rest of the gryffindors! But how will Flint get expelled? Oh - he'll want to leave. :P I get it... Snape's evil!

    Another great chapter. :)

    Author's Response: :-) Thanks!! I'm glad you like the bits with the twins - that was my favorite part to write, too.
Title: Small Deeds 08 Jun 2009 2:49 am
Reviewer: Phoenix Phyre (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww... that was so cute! Kallie finally forgave Harry. "Gives Kallie clothes without giving Callie clothes" That could be confusing, but I figured out what you meant. Please update again soon, I love your story

    Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah I wasn't sure how to say that in house-elf speak without it being a *little* unclear.

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