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Title: Axis and Allies 06 May 2009 7:32 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    oh no. Poor Harry! What a mess for him! it was good that he fought back before though. I hope that Malfoy won't make things too miserable for him! It's so cool that Harry is a metamorphmagus and that Tonks is helping him. :)

    Good chapter!! thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah he's got a bit to figure out, now, doesn't he? So does Malfoy. I suppose Snape had to screw up eventually, but did it have to be in front of Malfoy, seriously?
Title: World War II - part 2 04 May 2009 3:33 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    it was good......and funny in places. Please let them get along soon????

    Author's Response: Thanks! LOL working on it! Next chapter things should pick up a bit.
Title: World War II - part 2 02 May 2009 11:16 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the chapter, the elf is cute and the whole thing with the horrible tasting stuff in his mouth made me chuckle, as Severus said...he was warned lol :)

    Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, Harry was totally asking for it. Not his brightest moment, I must say. Glad you liked it. :-)
Title: World War II - part 2 02 May 2009 2:14 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! It made me think that Snape's made a teensy bit of progress with Harry, not much, but a tiny bit. Ha! Harry accidently 'stealing' a House Elf was so funny! I hope you write more of Kallie - I like the way you write her - most House Elves are just annoying, but Kallie's actually got a personality. Good luck with those exams!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yup, baby steps. Hopefully next chapter things will pick up a bit on that front. I'm glad you like Kallie. She's looking to be a (relatively) major character in this, just 'cause I like her, too. She reminds me a bit of Mrs. Weasley, if you turned her into a house-elf. Ewwww Chinese exam. I'll let you know how I do :-)
Title: World War II - part 2 02 May 2009 12:24 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Very fun, favorite or not!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: World War II - part 2 01 May 2009 2:58 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great! Harry has his own house elf! I wonder what Severus will say to that if he ever finds out.

    Severus' s punihsment was fair after all he warned Harry to quit swearing at him. I for one would have been dead if I had ever used such words in front of my teacher--my parents were very big on respecting teachers. That potion reminded me a little of the Snape 'mouthwash' in my Angel fic, it sounded so disgusting, and the way harry got water all over, was funny!

    And so was the part with The Holy Grail line--"I don't want to go on the cart!" That part is one of my favorites! That and the coconuts and the pigeons. LOL!
    The last part was great too, with both of them trying to hide their humor at Snape's remark!

    Author's Response: Thanks!! BTW, I should probably give you some credit for the yucky potion concept - I'd read your fic when I wrote this, so it probably influenced me. I'll add it to the chapter notes. :-) Yeah I like the little last bit, too. It was fun to write. :-)
Title: World War II - part 2 01 May 2009 2:23 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    huh? Poor Severus is confusing Harry. Poor Harry. *huggles Harry and Kallie*

    Author's Response: Yup confusion all around! (Except maybe Kallie, she seems to know exactly what she's doing) :-)
Title: World War II - part 2 01 May 2009 12:36 am
Reviewer: Gem (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thought that was a well written hilarious chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!! That makes me feel better. :-)
Title: World War II - part 2 30 Apr 2009 10:27 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    It's not your favorite? Really?? I though that it was quite enjoyable. I hope that you update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! It'll be a little while - I've got a week of studying, then a week of exams to get through before I get anymore real free-time. 'Till then I'll be squishing writing into my breaks. :-(
Title: World War II - part 2 30 Apr 2009 9:25 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this one. Especially the “You do realize that there is a species of flying pig native to Great Britain?" line.

    I can see trouble up ahead with Kallie and the blouse, though.

    Well done!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah things will get interesting with Kallie. I personally am quite pleased with my first entirely non-canon character. :-)

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