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Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 1:12 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I thought I had reviewed, but then realised that I got booted off the computer by my kids before I had a chance to! :)

    I love how Albus and Harry cleared the air between them; that was needed! I think that Harry had a lot of resentment built up inside him. I'm glad that Harry finally has someone whom he can trust, and feels saved and cared for. Sev is his rock now. Aw...here come those warm fuzzies again, threatening to take me over....but I don't mind!

    Author's Response:

    Whoops! Glad you realized you hadn't reviewed, 'cause I love hearing from you.

    You're so invigorating! :)

    Yes, that was a very intense and necessary confrontation and now that everything's out in the open, Harry can have a better relationship with Severus and eventually Dumbledore as well.

Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 9:09 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was intresting. I do hope Sirius can be cured. Insanity is worse then death. Dumbledore is going to have a very hard time to try and atone for his mistakes. Of that I'm quite sure.

    Author's Response:

    It is and if Severus can worm the info out of Bella, Sirius should be cured.

    Yes, it will take a long time for them to trust Dumbledore again, and the way back will be rocky, but then no penance is ever easy.

Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 9:02 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I finally understand fully why I never liked Dumbledore... Mila

    Author's Response: He can be very manipulative, can't he?
Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 6:44 am
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    Now I see what you meant about two people. I had totally forgotten about Albus. I am so Glad Harry gave him whatfore! He deserves far more than a dressing down though. :)

    Author's Response: Yes, I know.  Harry needed to do that, both for himself and to prove to Albus that he was through being manipulated for the greater good of anything.  I think Albus is now aware that he might have lost both harry and Sev by acting as he did and will try his best to make amends next time he sees them. 
Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 5:40 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoo! Harry rules! Albus has had that coming for ages. I'm really proud Harry told him how he feels and how he won't be used anymore.

    Can't wait to see Bella and Severus next and what happens to Malfoy.

    Author's Response: Okay that's coming up! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 5:28 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Harry for standing up for himself. He needed to do that, to show Albus that he's not going to just sit back and let him dictate to him anymore. Go Harry1 And I can't wait for the prank! Malfoy needs to get his!

    Author's Response:

    Harry did indeed need to do that.  And malfoy is going to get a huge surprise!

Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 5:13 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Dumbledore
    *huggles Dumbledore plushie*
    Poor angsty Harry
    *huggles Harry plushie*
    *reads chapter notes* Le gasp! I'm way excited for the prank!

    Author's Response:

    Aww! That's so sweet!

    A lot of people are excited for it, can;t wait to see how you like it!

Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 5:10 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the conversation and how Harry seemed to lose control there for a while, shattering office items and all. Hopefully, Dumbledore will be able to make things up to them both somehow, though I do agree that he's been a total d-bag during Harry's entire life. Good grief. Please update soon--I'm excited about Harry pranking Draco!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry had some repressed anger that needed to be released, Dumbledore was lucky he didn;t get belted in the nose like Sirius did.

    Dumbledore had a lot of making up to do, and it will take a long time for Harry to start to trust him again.  Just as it did Severus, and Severus still doesn't truat him fully.

    The prank is underway!

Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 14 May 2009 4:43 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great chapter! Molly's concern was touching but over the top, just like Molly should be. Snape and Harry were terrific, too. I really loved Sirius, though, and Remus, too. Both were very believable and both were very human. The best part was the end. I loved what Snape did (well, I didn't Love it, but it was justice and I agreed) and I love how Harry and Sirius dealt with it. All in all a very good chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I know what you mean. 

    I'm glad you liked how I portrayed all of them, at times I wasn't sure if they were all IC or not, but it was a neat chapter to write.

Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 3:59 am
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Albus...I know he's done some nasty things..but at the end of this chapter all I really wanted to do was hug him! I hope he and Harry make up in the end...

    Author's Response: Well, that will take some doing and time . . .but Harry has a most forgiving nature, much more so than Severus. 

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