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Title: A Pawn No More 14 May 2009 3:48 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job! And I can't wait for the prank!

    Author's Response: Thanks and the prank should be really funny, to balance out the angst in previous chapters.
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 13 May 2009 9:29 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    No he can't die! Can he? T__T
    Very long chapter and loved every part of it sad but still loved it. I really liked the end of the chapter Harry isn't holding all his emotions inside. And lastly Beatrix LeStrange you're going down strange lady! lol, keep up the great work!

    Author's Response:

    Uh . . .not since I'm writing the story, no.

    No, Harry has learned to trust Severus like no other, and he's not afraid to let Severus see him cry.

    Heaven help Bellatrix, because Snape is very very angry with her.  Nobody hurts his fledgling!

    Thanks for reviewing! :)

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 13 May 2009 1:47 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    If I were Bella, I'd be digging a hole . . .to China or maybe the ends of the earth.

    Loved the Severus and Harry interaction here. It was perfect. Can't wait to see what Harry says to the Old Meddler.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, me too! Severus is going to be on the warpath. 

    Thanks and that chapter will be coming up soon!

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 13 May 2009 12:48 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! Sev is being very understanding though. I love how he stood up to Albus.
    BTW: couldn't Sev either legimens Harry or put Harry's ministry fight memory into a penseive to try & find out what spell Bellabitch cast?

    Author's Response:

    Severus will come through when he's needed and he protects Harry like his own.

    Even if he did do that, it wouldn;t help, because the spell is one Bella created herself, and so only she knows the counter.  No, this requires a confrontation with her, which is something I'm looking forward to writing.  But first . . .Harry vs. Dumbledore.

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Run Bella Run.

    Author's Response: Got that right! Run, witch and hide under the bed, because Big Bad Mister Snape is after you! Mwahahahaha!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:30 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Harry. I hope that Sirius will get better. Or maybe he will stay in his dog form forever - whatever if he is happy... Mila

    Author's Response: If Severus can manage to make Bella tell him the counter, Sirius will recover.  Staying in his Animagus form wouldn;t be good, because even as a dog, Sirius is still insane. Cross your fingers and hope Sev comes through!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    OOHH! Somebody's in trouble! And I can't wait to see what Severus does to Bellatrix! :D

    Author's Response: Yes, two somebodies, in fact! Just wait and see! Severus is going to do something nasty!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:29 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I like fierce protective paternal Sev. I can see that it was hard for him to figure out how to offer Harry the comfort he needed, but in the end he was perfect :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks.  You're right, it was hard for him at first, since he's not used to doing it, but in the end he figured it out.
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:28 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the confrontation between Sev and Bella!!!

    Author's Response: It's coming, trust me!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry. I really hope that some cure for Sirius can be found, because Harry will never forgive himself.

    I have a feeling that Bella is going to be toast when Sev is finished with her. I love how Severus is so protective of Harry now. Too cute.

    I'm really looking forward to that conversation between Harry and the Headmaster.

    Severus really looks on Harry like a son, doesn't he?

    Nice progression of the relationship. Good work.

    Author's Response:

    No, he won't . . .if Sirius doesn;t recover. 

    Bella will be a smear on the floor if Sev has his way, but I think I need to leave her alive for now, so he might just hurt her a little. 

    Severus has finally come to terms with how he feels about Harry.  He loves the kid like a son, a very new concept for him. 

    You'll be seeing that conversation soon!

    I'm glad you liked the way the relationship progressed, I was almost afraid it was going too fast. 


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