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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Mentor 28 Apr 2009 4:44 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Yey!! I really like the whole conversation about Harry's vision. It's nice to see some of Harry's insecurity, and how Sev deals with it.

    Author's Response: Thanks, the vision wa simportant and even though he's used to handling things himself, Harry still has much insecurity to work through.  Severus is, I think, handling it very well especially sinece he never had to do anything like this before.
Title: Mentor 28 Apr 2009 3:19 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
    eep! so freakin cute! so freaking cute! EEEK!
    Sev and Harry are cute! EEP!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they are aren't they?

    Just don't let them know you said that, LOL!

Title: Mentor 28 Apr 2009 3:10 am
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, so cute! I'm not even really sure why...I suppose happy interactions between those two just give me the warm fuzzies! I love that Crabbe is getting a mind of his own, and a very well developed one at that!.... and Ron seems to be losing his..what little he had anyway. I can't wait to see how things turn out!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response:

    They do to me also and there will be more to come.

    Yes, Crabbe is shaping up nicely and you'll see more of that next chapter.

    Ron will be getting apointed wake-up call soon from many people!

Title: The Toad At Bay 27 Apr 2009 4:28 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! I love it!!!! IN YOUR FACE UMBITCH!!!!
    Absolutely awesome. I skipped a few chapters to the one before Harry revealed himself, and I have to say incredible.I love the way Sev and Harry reconciled themselves. Please update soon! I'll be waiting!!

    Author's Response: yes, I liked killing her off . . .she really deserved it! I have just updated, by the way.
Title: The Toad At Bay 27 Apr 2009 2:04 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I loved the way you killed her off! I hope Harry and Severus have a good experience with the Occlumency this time around! Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and it should be better than last time, considering that harry and Sev are actually getting along this time.
Title: The Toad At Bay 27 Apr 2009 1:51 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! They are still outside, sorry when you made Snape summon the First Aid I thought he was indoors XD my mistake.

    o.O ONE VERY GOOD reason to stay away from the Forbidden Forest! AND don't wear pink! lol

    Author's Response: Yes, that's for sure! And watch out for gigantic man-eating birds!
Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 9:05 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, I hadn't been expecting her to die. I'm a bit surprised that Severus isn't more upset that Harry took things into his own hands. I don't think Harry really set out meaning to kill her, but more that it just happened that way.

    Is Dumbley going to come back now? Please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Well, he knows the kid does things by impulse, and he didn't intend to really hurt her, it wasn't anyone's fault the bird woke up . . .unless you count Umbridge screaming!

    He will be back, but not for awhile yet! Gives Severus and Harry some time to bond some more. 

    And I've updated!

Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 8:21 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
    Hecks yes! *does happy dance*
    Ding dong, the witch is dead!
    :] this made my day even though I spent it at a theme park
    you're awesome

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

     

Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 6:50 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay1 I'm so glad she's dead and the way you did it was incredible. I love the idea of Severus and Harry being mentor and apprentice.

    Author's Response: All right! Hope you like the next one!
Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 5:55 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    See, I go away for a couple of days and the umbitch dies. Love it! Harry as the apprentice? Hehehehe! Draco and Ron are going to both be beyond livid! Can't wait! And Dumbles comes back to Snape's wrath over Harry's home life. Go for it!

    Author's Response: They are and God help Dumbledore when Snape and Harry get through with him.  Isn't it great? I've a new one up!

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