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Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 4:55 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Was it Freedom himself that killed Umbridge? Yikes, what a way to die. I'm glad that she's dead though.

    So as Snape's apprentice, does Harry have to live with him? Will that give Snape custody over Harry, and what happens if he reports Harry's relatives?

    I know, I know, so many questions! LOL! Update soon please I can't wait to see what happens next. Will you show a confrontation with the muggles and Snape?

    Author's Response:

    No, the Stymphalaina Bird was not summoned by Freedom, he didn;t even know it existed.  It was just bad timing . . .or luck . . .or karma coming back onto her. 

    Well, he could . . .but not right away.  You'll see what the apprenticeship entails next chapter, and I would imagine Severus could report them for negligence and other abuse if he wanted to.

    Yes, I could do that too, I don;t know what I'll be doing in regards to them yet, though.

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 4:23 pm
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant!
    Pity Ron is not adult yet to see sense, hope he will be cured of it.
    The part in Umbridge's office was great! Ancient justice came upon her head.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Ron needs a reality check and a stern talking to from someone!

    Glad you enjoyed Dolores's fate.  Ancient justice came, all right, and it saw and it conquered.

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 3:10 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Umbridge out of Hogwarts at last!
    I really liked the quarrel between Harry and Ron, I think you managed to paint a really IC Ron.
    And I liked McGonagall, and her solution for Harry and Severus :-)

    Author's Response:

    Isn;t it great~ let's have a party!!

    Oh good, because sometimes Ron is hard for me to write.

    Minerva can be very clever at times, especially when it comes to helping out Harry.

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 2:06 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome!! Glad Umbitch got hers!! Looking forward to Harry as Severus' apprentice!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad too! Now you can see how harry and Sev are getting along.
Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 1:04 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder if Umbridge is really dead. People like her tends to show up again...
    Severus is lucky, though, that she ended this way. He threatened her and she might as well want to take him to Azkaban with her - a Pensive memory showed to the judge would condemn him.
    It is good to "see" Harry flying again!
    Mila

    Author's Response:

    Oh, she's dead, unless someone resurrects her, and even then there wouldn;t be much left considering she'd be digested.

    She would have tried, that's for sure and he might have been in trouble, but alls well that ends well.

    You'll see more of Freedom soon!

    And the next one;s up!

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 10:04 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I like your way of dealing with Umbridge better than canon's lol
    Here we have the legal way coupled with something that satisfies our bloodlust lol

    Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the great compliment.  I always felt that she got away with murder in the books. 

    I wanted to have both ways, to show that yes, wizards DO have laws that they should and do follow, and consequences for those who really break them.

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 9:33 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    NICE!!! Way to go, Snape!
    Couldn't have happened to a nicer girl.

    Author's Response:

    Got THAT right

    Three cheers for Sev!

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 8:57 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that she got her by giant bird! That's too priceless. ANd I knew Ron was going to be a major git!

    Author's Response:

    Great, I wanted her to meet her end differently and Azkaban just wouldn;t do it, considering who she knows in the Ministry.  She might have gone in and come out two days later.  So . . .it was death by Stymphalian Bird.

    yes, Ronis behaving in his usual prejudiced adolescent fashion, sigh!

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 8:43 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a satisfying chapter!! God, it felt wonderful to watch Dolores Umbridge get exactly what she had coming to her--and in such detail! Ah! A "10" for this writer, please!

    Author's Response: Yay1 I so LOVED giving her what for! Thanks for your awesome response!
Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 8:42 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This needed to happen to Umbridge! Can't wait to read your next post. Love this story. Love Freedom and Snape; Ron needs to chill out!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Ron needs a good smack upside the head all right!

    The next one is up, just so you know!


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