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Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 2:02 am
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay Snape!!! I can't wait for his confrontation with Umbitch!!

    Author's Response:

    You won't have to wait long, because I've posted it!

Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 1:56 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    YEY!! All is well with the world! Well...sorta. And now Sev gets to take a piece out of Umbridge. Woot. Much fun:-) I like how Snape is mad at Harry for not telling about the cuff the same way he was mad at Freedom about attacking Malfoy. It creates a nice link, and is also just nice evidence of Sev's concern for Harry. Much sweet fluffiness. :-)

    Author's Response: It is . . .for now! Sev does care about Harry and will scold him if he feels it's necessary to get the kid to pay attention to his own health.  And just wait till you read the next part!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 1:55 am
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad Harry and Severus managed to talk. And that Severus found out about the cuff.
    And I loved the title!

    Author's Response: Thanks, i was wondering who would notice the title! There's more to come as Umbridge finally gets hers!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 1:54 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn it! I KNEW there was something hinky about that cuff!
    (Yes hinky; and I watch too much NCIS)

    I'm so glad that Sev & Harry are friends again.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, there was!

    That's my nephew's favorite show!

    yes, they are finally friends again.

    Hope you enjoy the next part!

Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 1:11 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    Darn it...I should not have read this directly after reading the new chapter of Harry's New Home - I was already an emotional wreck and this kept me there right over the top. It's kind of hard to explain tears while sitting qietly at your desk :-)
    I think that the talk went wonderfully! And I can't wait to see the confrontation between Harry and Ron - I love those!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I can see that would be hard to explain.  Aww!

    That's going to be a biggie and so is the one with Umbridge!

Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 1:09 am
Reviewer: Gem (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow, great story!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Please keep on reading!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 12:47 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    0.0 I made an account to review this story lol ^__^ loved the chapter but I'm a bit confused how they ended up from outside to inside.

    Author's Response:

    Really? Wow! I'm honored. 

    Uh . . .what do you mean how they ended up inside? They are still in the glen at the end of the chapter, with Severus hugging Harry.  They haven't gone anywhere yet. 

Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 12:47 am
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter.
    Thank you for updating so often. I really appreciate that.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing so often.  I really appreciate that! So glad you're enjoying this!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I definitely like your Hagrid - he's so down to earth and sensible! Yay! Thank goodness Snape found Harry's letter, I was really worried that Severus would go and say something else awful to Harry before he read it, but thank you for laying my fears to rest :) Brilliant build up with the Stimulant Potion - it was written at exactly the right pace! I can't wait to read the 'discussion' chapter - please update soon! I wonder what Harry's magic stirring meant...

    Author's Response: Yes, he is. I kind of picture him to be like Sam in LOTR, he knws what's what, even if he isn't a brilliant wizard and he knows the most important things ar eones that can't be bought--friendship, love, and trust.  If Severus hadn't found the letter, he might have done just what you said.  Glad you enjoyed the progression of days and the next one;s just been posted, hope you like it! Thanks, Jen!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 9:21 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, it was kind of a weird place to end the chapter...
    Very interesting developments, though. I hope Sev sees the cuff soon, because that is just bad news!!!

    Author's Response:

    I know, but . . .I had to end it somewhere.

    Severus will see the cuff in the next chapter, it is very bad and hopefully you enjoy the confrontation.


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