Okay, so I just had to review. I liked the long chapter, but seriously? You ended it there? That is so not fair! :) sigh, maybe an update tomorrow? I'll be finished with exam by night it'll be a nice ending to my term. lol. :D
Author's Response: I know, but . . .I really had to go to sleep. :) Yes, I should have the next one posted then. Hope all went well with exams!
Oh man, I feel so bad for Harry. Nothing is worse than being ignored. Severus just doesn't know how to deal with the situation though and he's doing what he needs to do to try and cope. It makes me sad that they both feel so lonely. I hope they can get something worked out in the next chapter.
I'm very curious about the cuff--is it making Harry's punishments worse than they normally would be? I have a feeling it's something even fouler than the blood quill and hope that Harry will speak up about it sometime soon.
Great chapter--I hope to read more soon!
-P.G.
Author's Response: I agree with that. being ignored is the worst. Severus doesn't know how to fix things, he's very awkward, much like Harry. You'd be right about the cuff, it is a nasty item and more will be revealed about it soon. It is quite wicked and evil, but then it was from Umbridge the Awful.
| Title: Turmoil
| 21 Apr 2009 10:39 pm
|
| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
I'm feeling so bad for Harry. And I'm sure the cuff Umbridge put on him is against the law, just like the blood quill. I hope Severus sees it, and helps Harry with it, it would help them build a new relationship :)
Author's Response: It would do that, all right. Anything that witch does is usually against the law, she's bad news all around.
You know we're dying here, waiting for the breakthrough between Harry and Severus! Worse, I had two more e-mail notices of updates...that were LIES! There was only this chapter, not two more, like I was teased to believe there were! I deleted them before I realized there was a "Report This" on 'em. Oooohhh--do please update soon! (And thanks for having given us this chapter!)
Author's Response: I know, I'll try and hurry, really I will! Sorry about the problem with the updates, I had to reload the chapter three times!
I love this story, I told you more than once, but I can't wait for the next chapter! Can someone kick Umbridge's a** for maltreatments? Please let that "someone" be Severus. And... Poor Harry.
Author's Response: Yes, that will be happening soon, from more than one angle. Severus will be doing some of it, for sure! Poor Harry indeed!
Oh, man. If they could just calm down and TALK to one another! They've both got such tempers. Loving it! :-)
Author's Response: Yes and that's their whole problem. They're letting their tempers talk for them. But eventually they'll calm down.
Wow. Amazing. What emotions and problem! Poor Harry! Poor Severus! The only one happy about all of this might be Umbridge. Yuk! Poor guys. They will have to get through a lot of pain maybe to get close to each other again, and I fear for the time Harry has to spend alone with Umbridge. He must control himself or he will get his wand snapped! Severus needs to help him - not only controlling himself but making up all his missed work. Poor boy. how is e going to get through the rest of the term?
Author's Response: I know, it's really sad how each needs the other and yet they allow their tempers to get in the way. Yes, I'd say Umbridge is celebrating right now . . .the evil thing! Yes, definitely Harry needs to cultivate some self-control, hopefully he can do it. Sev does need to help him, but first he has to see that Harry didn't betray him and that the kid still needs him. As for the rest of the term, he needs some help before he collapses, as you'll see next chapter.
| Title: Severus's Bane
| 20 Apr 2009 8:00 am
|
| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Great chapter! Poor Severus! Poor Harry! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! More is now up!
OMG sooooo good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Don't keep them fighting too long, it's too sad!
Author's Response: I know, and I'll try not to, but they can't resolve things too quickly. Thanks!
|