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Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Birthday!!!

    Oh. My. Cow.
    Harry's dead.
    When Harry and Snape get back to their quarters, Harry is going to be one dead duck.

    I loved how Harry came to Severus's rescue, and then Severus was very clearly ready to kill for Harry/Freedom.
    I just hope that Severus will forgive Harry for "deceiving" him.

    As always, great chapter. And I have to say that you astound me with how fast you are putting out these absolutely amazing chapters.

    I hope that you have a wonderful birthday!! ;-}

    Leilia

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, he is!! One dead child! Sev's going to stuff and mount him.

    he was and eventually Snape might.

    Thanks so much and I really can't tell you my secret . . .it's a kind of magic LOL!

Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe you ended it THERE!

    PS Happy B'day

    Author's Response:

    nerve wracking, isn't it?

    Thanks!

Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 7:33 pm
Reviewer: pc (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love it

    Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 6:36 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Birthday! Now that was a great chapter - I loved the fight scene and the tension you built up beforehand. I wonder if Harry's dream really was prophetic or just an example of overwrought nerves? Hmm, interesting... I can't wait to find out what happens next - what Umbridge will do, what Snape will say, if anything at all, or how Harry will react! The description of him becoming a boy again was very nicely done, and the timing was excellent. I'm looking forward to whatever you have planned next.

    Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you're enjoying it.  Harry's dream . . .one never knows with the dreams of wizards . . .As for Sev, Harry & Umbridge . . .wait till I post again and you shall know all!
Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 5:23 pm
Reviewer: lilylove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No! evil cliffie snapegirl please update soon can't wait to see what happens. Happpy Birthday!

    Author's Response: Oh yes and thanks a lot!
Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well happy birthday!

    /Now/ can I start bothering you about your sequels, hmm?

    I didn't think you were serious about that warning... but... you... were. I know Sev feels betrayed but - don't kill Harry! Please? Severus open your damn eyes and see that he loves you - like you love him. ::cackles:: That's the feeling of betrayal right?

    Update soon.

    Love always,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Julie!

    yes, I know, I know! I'm getting to them! *grins*

    yes, I really was.  Severus is getting on a bit of an emotional roller coaster . . .when he gets off he'll be able to think again.

    Love ya too!

Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 4:50 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Birthday! Wow! I was wondering when the change was going to happen! It figures it would take something this horrendous to make Harry spontaneously turn back. What a great development! Now for Sev to deal with his sense of loss and feelings of betrayal. Not gonna be easy, I fear...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! See, I told you it would be unexpected, he just wasn't ready to give up his freedom, and it took a catastrophe to remind him, like any teenager, of his priorities. 

    No, it won't poor Sev!  Poor Harry too when he gets through with him.

Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry - he might have been! He and Sev need to have a long, long talk, don't they? It may take a few days...

    Author's Response: Yes, I know! They do, a very long one! And it probably will take at least that for both of them to calm down, think, and reflect on what they know about each other.
Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 4:06 pm
Reviewer: Love It (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant but horrible cliffhanger
    and happy Birthday

    Author's Response:

    Yup!

     

    Thank you!

Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 18 Apr 2009 3:22 pm
Reviewer: Eržika (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Things go down hill, aren't they? Poor Severus. But I still hope that he will talk to Harry and they will call trust.

    And: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

    Author's Response:

    Yes, but they'll get better after awhile!

    Thank you so sweet!


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