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Reviews For Broken Wings
:O :[ you're eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil. but i love you Author's Response: Aww . . .I know, it's just so nerve-wracking.
But . . .the WAIT IS OVER I've updated!
Also I think that Freedom should have talk to Severus who he is before he changes back. And hopefully Severus will have good common sence to not kicks him from his quarters. With situation which is in the castle, I muse with the idea that Harry would be better if he doesn't come back to the school and waited until Dumbleadore is back; than there should be no problem with getting back and take his OWLs. ...Perhaps Severus could teach Harry in his quarters at the same time Harry plays Freedom outside of the walls... (But there is my imagination getting wild) =o) P.S.: Sorry for mistakes, I'm not native speaker of English =o) Byeh each other and come with some plan, how to get rid off Umbridge...and Voldemort too. Also I think that Freedom should have talk to Severus who he is before he changes back. And hopefully Severus will have good common sence to not kicks him from his quarters. With situation which is in the castle, I muse with the idea that Harry would be better if he doesn't come back to the school and waited until Dumbleadore is back; than there should be no problem with getting back and take his OWLs. ...Perhaps Severus could teach Harry in his quarters at the same time Harry plays Freedom outside of the walls... (But there is my imagination getting wild) =o) P.S.: Sorry for mistakes, I'm not native speaker of English =o) Bye Author's Response: Yes, but remember, Harry can't afford to wait that long, his deadline is running out, so he'll be forced to change back before Dumbledore comes back to Hogwarts. remember in the books Dumbledore didn;t show up again till they went to the Department of Mysteries. As for what will happen between Harry and Severus, now you can read the next chapter. Hope you like it and thanks for reviewing, you write English very well. :)
One quick note, you wrote "fulsade", I think that you mean "fusillade". Author's Response: Thanks, I really try hard not to make people wait while they're reading, since it kind of spoils the flow of the story. Yes, i corrected that, thanks!
~Frosty Author's Response: Now would I do that? Of course not! But Umbridge might. Glad you liked dumbles exit, Fawkes enjoyed it too!
Author's Response: Now there's an idea, too bad both of them would never do it!
Ooh, I hope that Umbridge doesn't capture Harry/Freedom, and have toasted hawk for breakfast! (I meant figureatively!) Poor Trelawney, but I can't wait to see the pink monster deal with Firenze! Draco is such a spoiled prat. I wish Severus had come and caught him trying to hurt Freedom, he would have put the brat in his place. Another cliffie? Oh my! Well, that just means that you have to hurry up and update so we can find out what happens. Author's Response: Umbridge is soo nasty, she probably would enjoy that, and make Sev watch while she ate him . . .ughh . . .that's a really gross image . . .okay, I'm going to stop thinking about that right now. Firenze will be giving the toad palpatations, all right! Yes, Severus would have, all right! I should be updating sometime today, so keep an eye out! Thanks, Pandora!
Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you liked it1 I should be updating very soon!
Give it to her! This was great! Now please update, I need to know what happens! Author's Response: Okay I will soon! Thanks!
I enjoyed this chapter because it was very witty. I especially like when your Snape interacts with Trelawney and the revenge Freedom arranges with the other owls. Poor Umbridge--not! She deserves it, the wench! I really enjoyed reading about the birds torturing her! Good work! -P.G. Author's Response: Yes, that would NOT be a good thing! I thought it'd be funny for Severus to tell Sybill that, it seems like something he would say. And the birds will be torturing the toad some more in the next chapter. Mwahahaha!
Author's Response: I thought that was cool too! More shall be coming very soon! |
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