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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Concerned Friends 10 Apr 2009 7:29 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! here's another for you!
Title: Concerned Friends 10 Apr 2009 7:25 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Freedom!! He's so confused!! And poor Snape. It's gonna be quite a shock.

    I really liked how you portrayed Snape's hurt and Freedom's confusion. It makes it really clear how much the two of them have changed.

    Author's Response:

    Definitely! And there are more rocky waters ahead for them after this new chapter. 

    They have changed a lot, haven't they? And they'll change some more before this is all over.

Title: Concerned Friends 10 Apr 2009 6:12 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel bad for Snape--he thinks there's something really wrong with his hawk friend and their is! I would feel awkward too if Snape was trying to pet my animagus form, lol. Really, there is no good way for Harry to change back; if he hides and changes, Sev will loose his familiar, if he changes in front of Sev, well...the s*** will hit the fan. Bad news indeed.

    You're definitely milking this for all it's worth. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I know, poor Sev! he doesn;t know what to make of his familiar, it's like he's gone nuts.  Little does he know . . .And it's hard for Harry too, trying to reconcile THIS new Snape with the old one.  It's a difficult situation all around and yes, I'm milking it for every drop, LOL!
Title: Concerned Friends 10 Apr 2009 6:11 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yep, I knew that's what he'd want to do, Now all he has to "do" is reconcile the feelings "Freedom" has with those of "Harry" and I'd just bet that it's going to take talking things out with Sev to do it. All we need is one moment of short temper, or a good nightmare to throw freedom off of his guard and let something slip. If he does it as Freedom, Sev is less likely to kill him--as long as he doesn't wait TOO long.

    More soon please!
    V.

    Author's Response: Right, they both need a good long talk, but first Harry has to reveal that he's Freedom and that's going to take some doing, not to mention a pre-made bomb shelter for when Snape goes ballistic.  I've just updated and now you can see Dumbledore's secret.
Title: Concerned Friends 10 Apr 2009 5:56 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I will!
Title: Concerned Friends 10 Apr 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really loving this story :-) I had never really pictured Harry as a Hawk before, but actually I can see it. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I figured it made sense, since he's a natural flier and hawks are wickedly cool animals as well as being loyal and good friends, which Harry is.
Title: Things Remembered 10 Apr 2009 3:26 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter. I think you are handling the returning memories extremely well.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm trying to have Harry learn things a bit slowly, but he'll be finding out something new almost every chapter now, as secrets old and new are revealed.
Title: Things Remembered 10 Apr 2009 2:57 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Those horrible Dursleys! I really hate them! I hope someday Harry tells Snape about them. Poor Harry, he's so confused! I really feel for him. can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: I know I don't like them either and maybe one day harry will feel comfortable enough around Snape to talk about them! Thanks!
Title: Things Remembered 10 Apr 2009 12:37 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful emotions here! Poor Harry, he's so confused and yet he's still worried about Severus. Aww!

    Author's Response: Yes, poor Harry! But he really does have a good heart!
Title: Things Remembered 09 Apr 2009 3:18 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    well, Harry is getting his memories back... I wish he would tell Snape about them, it would certainly help their situation...

    Author's Response: I know, but he is afraid . . .afraid of what it could mean for their relationship, and it's also very confusing to him and he's not sure how to react.  He'll be getting some more information from Ron and Hermione soon!

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