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Title: Things Remembered 08 Apr 2009 11:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Omg! He's getting close to remembering who he is. Do you know that you had me with tears in my eyes at those memories of Vernon throwing him into the cupboard. Naughty girl. You should have warned me that I would need tissues.

    Please update and have Harry transform soon, I can't stand the suspense!! Oh, but then Severus will hate him won't he? Or maybe not if he finds out about those abusive Dursleys! Uh, I'm so worried for Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Oops! Forgot about that!

    He is getting close to recalling who he is and then he has to decide what to do . . .tell or not tell?

    Severus might not hate him, but he will be very angry and betrayed by him, which is a dangerous combination.

    It's going to be a rough time for them.

Title: Things Remembered 08 Apr 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev and Harry! Sev is so concerned for his pet and Harry is just totally mixed up with emotions. I really hate to think about how Sev will react when he finds out about Harry...yikes.

    Can't wait for more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I know, Severus is scared his familiar is ill and poor Harry thinks he's gone crazy.  It's a lot for him to absorb. 

    Severus is going to . . .well I won't ruin it, but it's going to be major. 

    I shall try and post again soon!

Title: Things Remembered 08 Apr 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev and Harry! Sev is so concerned for his pet and Harry is just totally mixed up with emotions. I really hate to think about how Sev will react when he finds out about Harry...yikes.

    Can't wait for more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's going to be quite a shock! For Severus that is! He's going to hit the roof!
Title: Things Remembered 08 Apr 2009 10:41 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    If Freedom told Sev of all of his dreams, Sev would figure it out... animagus

    The staff dinner was priceless.

    Author's Response:

    You're right, but then it would be over too soon, and that's not what I want.  Harry still needs to find out a few more things about Dumbledore, Ron and Hermione, and Lily and Sev and James.

    Glad you liked the dinner, I loved it!

Title: Things Remembered 08 Apr 2009 10:30 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I could care less about Ron and Hermione.

    I'm more interested in Severus and Harry and figuring out if Snape has an animagus form that's a bird. Or an animagus at all.

    I love reading first person! You write it beautifully and I greatly enjoy it - you get to know the character alone, his deepest desires and thoughts, his secret passions and loves...

    Black Gold is in first person...

    When can I start bugging you to start writing my sequels, hmm?

    Update soon, you know I love it.

    Author's Response:

    I'll go back to Sev and Harry in a chapter or so.  As for that little detail, wait and see! All shall be revealed . . .eventually!

    I enjoy writing first person too, you can really get inside a character's head that way. 

    I love Black Gold!

    In a few weeks, LOL!

    Bye!

Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! freedom was great and so was Snape and trelawney! Umbridge . . .I just want to kill her! can't wait to see what happens next when Harry starts remembering!

    Author's Response: I know . . .I've had thoughts along that line myself! You can see what Harry remembers right now!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 2:58 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Sev wa sso clever and I loved seeing Umbridge get hers! Go Freedom!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I loved doing that! Freedom rules!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 10:56 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! Loved the scene with Umbridge falling on the table! Very funny! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks, more has been posted!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, great chapter! Umbridge really deserved what happened to her, but now I worry for Severus and his hawk. Very good job on Umbridge, she was very in character, I disliked her perhaps more in your story than I did in the books. Thanks so much for the update! Great story so far!

    Author's Response: Yes, they could be in trouble later on.  Revenge is a dish best served cold.  I really detest that woman! I was happy to give her what she deserved.  Thank you!

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