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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Freedom's Flight 07 Apr 2009 7:53 pm
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooh! i loved this! i can't wait to read more. keep up the fantastic work!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I've already posted the next chapter.
Title: Freedom's Flight 07 Apr 2009 1:23 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was so great, now I'm crying! Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks and here's a tissue!
Title: Freedom's Flight 07 Apr 2009 12:02 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I'm really gonna be sad when freedom becomes Harry again, never mind what Severus is going to think!

    Author's Response: yes, we'll miss Freedom, although freedom is also Harry and just because he's not a hawk doesn't mean his personality alters.
Title: Freedom's Flight 06 Apr 2009 10:17 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! It's kind of sad to think of Harry getting his memories back and having to return to the real world, but it has to happen. Poor kid sure needed the break, as did Sev...

    Author's Response: Yes, I know, but we do need Harry back eventually.  Though I love him as Freedom a lot! Yes, he did need a break and so did Severus, but once he returns, maybe they can find a way to help each other.
Title: Freedom's Flight 06 Apr 2009 5:30 am
Reviewer: frostedmidnight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh! I absolutely love this, and am extremely glad I stumbled across it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you and I hope you like the next chapter!
Title: Freedom's Flight 06 Apr 2009 3:59 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    SQUEEEEEEEEE!
    Two weeks, does that mean..? Le gasp. I hope you don't make Harry's return to humanity too angsty.

    Author's Response: well, there has to be some angst, since it's teenage Harry, you know1 And a very shocked and sarcastic vulnerable Severus.  But things should work out. 
Title: Freedom's Flight 06 Apr 2009 1:53 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and hope you like the next one that's been posted!
Title: Freedom's Flight 06 Apr 2009 1:21 am
Reviewer: xam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi! I just found this story and read all 10 chapters. It's really quite good. I like how you update frequently...it make's it so much easier to follow stories when they are updated so often.
    KUDOS!!!

    Author's Response: Hi! thanks for reading so much so fast! I do try and update frequently, so the reader doesn't lose the flow of the story and have to re-read.  Glad you're enjoying this and I've updated again!
Title: Freedom's Flight 06 Apr 2009 1:11 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story! It'svery touching how Snape's beginning to heal a bit and how Harry makes the ice in his heart strat to melt! And I like the fact that Severus is so happy with the bird he doesn't even realize that it knows things a bird couldn't possibly know. It shows that even he can loose his logical view on everything when his heart gets involved! I like it very much especially since you still write Sverus as IC as possible - a great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks! You're right, Sev is very happy at having found a familiar he can relate to and he doesn't even realize that Harry's beens sending him subliminal messages all along.  Yes, even Severus Snape allows himself to care once in awhile and then watch what happens!
Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 10:14 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello! I enjoyed this chapter, especially Harry's flights. I'm looking forward to the moment where he regains his memory...

    Author's Response: Thanks! I loved it when he flew, it was exhilerating writing it.  Harry will be regaining his memories, most of them, two chapters after this.

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