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Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 6:46 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!! Poor Snape!!! What a mess he is in. What Harry!hawk told him was so wonderful, but so sad. I hope that Harry and Hagrid will be able to help Snape. Poor guy. Fantastic story!! Thank you for sharing it with us and for all your quick updates! they are great!

    Author's Response: I know, poor Sev! But maybe he'll remember at least part of what Harry said to him when he's better.  He definitely needs help and Twixie is just the elf to bring it.  I try to update so long as I've a chapter written, which is pretty much one a day if I'm home. 
Title: Hawk Speak 03 Apr 2009 6:36 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, great chapter! Snape can talk to his hawk! How cute! I loved their dialogue. The scene with the Slytherins was great. Great movement and development in your story! Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: I wanted to do something different and I figured if they could speak to each other before Harry changed back, it would make their relationship so much more fulfilling.  And I love playing with the Slytherins, they're fun!
Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 5:39 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Indeed, can they?

    ::stares tiredly at blurry words of chapter:: I'm not crying. But then again it could be because I'm dead tired and emotionally exhausted...

    Severus had better live, Snapegirl, or I'll personally kill Lord Voldemort and laugh while I'm doing it.

    Update soon, dear.

    Author's Response: Go right ahead, my dear! I'm sure Harry will be glad it's you instead of him.  And you ought to know I'd never kill off my Sev!
Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 3:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Severus! Where ARE those tissues?

    I hope that Severus is going to be alright. I'm sure Hagrid with all his knowledge about every kind of creature can cure Sev. Maybe Harry too somehow.

    Always the cliffies. Sniff sniff.

    Author's Response:

    I know I'm so mean to poor Sevvy.  And mean to you too, with my darn cliffies, LOL!

    Both familiar and mnetor will work together to save Sev, don't worry.

Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 1:57 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Le gasp!
    Freedom will fix Sev's heart! I know it

    Author's Response: Yes he will, and Sev will fix Freedom's too!  They just don't know it yet.
Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 1:32 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I hope so! Poor Severus! I loved when he named Freedom, it's a perfect name! And when Freedom was screaming insults and nobody but Snape could understand him. But then you made me feel like crying at the end. But it was a great read!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like his name and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. 

Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 1:07 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff* loved the last bit. Though my favorite part was when Freedom/Harry started calling the Headmaster names.

    Excellent chapter and please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, harry has plenty to say to Dumbledore, doesn't he? LOL!

    Thanks and I just updated again. 

Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 9:52 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I LOVE that Twixie could hear him! This just gets better and better. (I sure say that a lot, don't I? But it's true!)

    Author's Response:

    I figured that would make sense, since she's magical.  You do, but I don't mind!

Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it. I especially like how you're handling Harry in hawk form. I'd hate for them to solve things too quickly. I get that Harry!Hawk will remember what Severus goes through--I hope that Severus will remember the things the hawk tells him about his past life. (well, obviously not things that the bird says when he's on the verge of unconsciousness LOL)

    Author's Response: Yes, when harry regains some more memories in a future chapter, he will be able to share more of his past with Severus, such as what happened to him at the Dursleys. 
Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 9:19 pm
Reviewer: cookyc (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow I love this story can't wait to read the next chapters hurry!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I just posted the next chapter. Enjoy!

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