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Title: Blurring 08 May 2009 9:46 am
Reviewer: Snarky B. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an interesting twist to the whole 'Severitus' scenario.

    Author's Response: Ah, see that part was from a challenge, so I don't get to take credit.  couldn't you comment on my worldbuilding and AU?  lol...
Title: Blurring 08 May 2009 8:28 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG this story is so wonderful. I've never read a reversal of the Severitus Challenge. You're a pioneer and I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I was answering a challenge, so the reversed severitus idea was not my own (I have another form of reversed severitus fic, also an answer to a challenge in which Harry is Snape's father due to time travel) but it was a lot of fun to write.  Don't worry, you won't have too long to wait for more.
Title: Blurring 08 May 2009 5:01 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. absolutely awesome!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Blurring 07 May 2009 11:54 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was original! Very surprising, all the time. Mila

    Author's Response: Thank you!  This fic surprised me much less everyone else.
Title: Blurring 07 May 2009 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is so brilliant! I love your take on this challenge...it's such an intriguing AU.

    I love the relationship between Harry and James, and Harry and Severus. I love that both men want to claim Harry as their own. I love that Severus has been a spy and that he gave the ledger over to the resistance, and now he knows that Harry can fulfill the prophecy and defeat Voldemort...if he can survive long enough. But with Severus and James on his side, I bet he can, though it might be tricky with the bit about the Cruciatus curse. But still, I don't want Harry to be able to cast that horrible, evil spell.

    Did I read that you're going to write a sequel? I hope so cause I would dearly love to read it!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  it was going to be much more conventional when I chose the challenge, but the more I played around with the ramifications of Harry being seen as Snape's son, the more it wanted to go dystopian on me.

    I actually have fun with Harry and the Cruciatus curse, and I hope my solution meets your approval.  I was actually really really pissed at JKR when she had the trio casting Unforgivable curses in DH.  Writing the interactions between these three characters was a lot of fun, and I want to keep building onto this universe.

    Yes, you heard right!  I intend to write three sequels and two prequels to this story.

Title: Blurring 07 May 2009 9:10 pm
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is very interesting! I really enjoyed your take on this challenge! I wonder if you would consider continuing this? It wouold be interesting to know what happens next!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response: i'm already planning to continue this with three sequels and two prequels.  I'm glad this has generated so much interest.
Title: Blurring 07 May 2009 8:08 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe - fantastic! I really like that you started this off with a solid, believable scene between Snape and Lily, and appointing James as Snape's secretary later on was inspired! Only problem is - I want to know what happens next! (Angst or otherwise) - whether Harry will finally be able to cast the Cruciatus, whether he and his 'family' will have to flee, whether Snape will be able to cope with the truth... Darn, you've brought up as many questions as you've answered and I love it. Write more? *puppy dog eyes*

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I really really need to write Lily more often, she's such a wonderful unknown.  The little James voice in my head that goes meta at me hates me for that secetary bit, but I'm glad I put it in.

    I intend to write two prequels and three sequels, so don't worry, you get to find out.

Title: Blurring 07 May 2009 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice Attack--I do love the angst here. At first, you had me wondering why on Earth Severus would want James as his secretary (and why James would accept), but I enjoyed the story behind that. I also liked how you added the ledger in there, very interesting! Plus, you had me thinking that Snape would reject Harry at the end, since he was so nasty in the beginning, despite his obvious care. I was pleasantly surprised that the two men are going to deal with the situation as best they can.

    The ending feels quite open though. I think it's because we don't really get to see what Harry thinks about the whole thing. I do like that last scene though--it was reassuring.

    Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I do just love to pour on the angst, don't I?  I'm glad I didn't throw you out of the story reading that, seeing as I don't think Snape was given much choice either.

    I know I'm the queen of mean Snape, but really, even my Snape's not that mean!  They actually like each other, much that it shows.

    Gven that there are going to be sequels, I sure hope the ending feels open!

Title: Blurring 07 May 2009 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I was really worried that Severus was going to reject Harry, but I really loved the way he accepted him as his son. Harry is very fortunate to have two fathers.

    I was wondering when I read the summary if I was going to like the idea of Harry being James' not Sev's son, but you have written it so beautifully and put so much emotion into it, how can I not love it!

    Author's Response: Good to know I'm not the only diehard drooling Severitus/Sevitus fan on here, but given the site... lol.  Gah, my Snape's mean, but he's not that mean, he could never reject Harry!  I'm glad I sold you on the idea even if you weren't sure to start.
Title: Blurring 07 May 2009 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting! I hope you expand this one, it has huge potential!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I intend to.  In fact, I'm already writing a prequel, and I have plans for another prequel and three sequels.

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