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Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 29 Jul 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 28 Jul 2009 2:08 pm
Reviewer: Cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey grugster. Great chapter. I loved the Albus/Harry training interaction. Now I'm also VERY curious about Harry's animagus form.
    Your description of the twilight-sphere was similar to one I have seen in a movie ("Nightwatch"). I really like your idea that the twilight can be accessed as a means of diversion and assassination.
    I hope that Alastor will make an appearance in the next chapter - due to reading your story I am starting to like him:-)
    Thank you so much for the update and for devoting your time to write for other people's entertainment.
    Love,
    Cammy

    Author's Response:

    First, thank you very much for this encouraging review! I needed it very much.

    Yes, I got the idea about the twilight from the Night Watch book series! Only that I left out the many layers the twilight has in this books. 

    Alastor is a main character in almost all my stories. You can find more on fanfiction(dot)net if you are interested. I have the same account name there. And yes, he will play a main role in the next chapter!

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 28 Jul 2009 7:36 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I am so glad that Harry and Severus are talking again. they need to be close, I think that they need each other. love the dynamics in this story. Thanks so much for updating and sharing it with us!

    Author's Response: No, I have to thank you SO much for reviewing. I feared the story became boring for my readers and I needed some encouraging reviews like yours to go on! Thank you for it!
Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 28 Jul 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Dark gray fur? Maybe a cat? My cat had charcoal gray fur.

    I liked how Albus told Harry that he was right to convince Severus. What a strange illness. It almost sounds like mono.

    It's sad that Harry has to put his life on hold just to kill a crazy mass murderer.

    Author's Response:

    No, cat! You will se soon!

    You also will find out more about Haryy's illness and the trying to convince Severus not to die will be a main part in this story.

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 14 – Ill or Not Ill 28 Jul 2009 3:27 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the stress is getting to him. And I'm glad he managed to convince Severus not to die, Harry needs him as well as Alastor and Poppy and Sev deserves a good life.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 26 Jul 2009 11:51 pm
Reviewer: cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pleeeaaase update soon again. Just because not so many people leave a review doesn't mean that they have lost their interest in your story. I am such a lazy reviewer myself:-) Please, don't abandon this story - it is one of my favorites.
    Love,
    Cammy

    Author's Response:

    I won't abandon this story, but it is a bit frustrating when you try to make it a good chapter and only get one review on it. Reviews are important for my motivation. Even if it is just saying "I'm still reading and like it" or something similar.

    Thank you for your review! 

Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 26 Jul 2009 5:22 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 19 Jul 2009 3:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is bad. It sounds like Harry's plan is going to be thwarted.

    That was sweet though when Harry asked if he could still live there after the war, and Poppy assured him that he would still have a home there.

    I'm worried about Severus though.

    Looking foward to the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Wow that was the first time I had to use a dictionary for translating a review! I never had heard of 'thwarted'. Thanks for teaching me something new. :)

    It seems that the readers aren't interested in this story but I will update it for you soon!

Title: Chapter 14 – Ill or Not Ill 13 Jul 2009 12:09 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was great. I feel really bad for Severus though, having to make a choice like that. Harry really cares about Severus though.

    Author's Response: They both care for the other. I'm glad yuo liked it!
Title: Chapter 2 - The Room 11 Jul 2009 6:19 pm
Reviewer: JessicaG (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ok so far i like this story, but i think i found a mistake. you wrote "Poppy threw a quick glance at her husband and then said"

    did i miss something? I dont think that she is married.

    Author's Response: This story is AU and so not all things or almost nothing is canon complain! In almost all my stories Poppy is married with Alastor. I hope that answers your question.

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