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Title: Chapter 10 - Waiting 31 May 2009 1:39 pm
Reviewer: cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I've never been a fan of Moody but I really like him in your story. Nice cliffy;-)

    Author's Response: Yes, the canon Moody isn't very nice and lovable. :) I'm glad you like my OC version.
Title: Chapter 10 - Waiting 31 May 2009 1:05 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh dear!!!

    Great chapter and thanks for updating xx

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review!
Title: Chapter 6 – A Big Brother 29 May 2009 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you've made Severus' text complex so that people like Poppy have to read in between the lines to get it. Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 5 - New Problems 29 May 2009 6:21 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you describe panic very well; I really enjoyed reading Harry's reactions to waking up in ch.2 and his hyperventilation scene here. They were fast-paced and realistic. Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the way I wrote about the panick attack!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 29 May 2009 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Snape isn't going to be too horrible to Harry. I wonder what he did to himself too, to get taken in by Poppy and Alastor. This is good writing--nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: All your questions will be answered in later chapters! :)
Title: Chapter 2 - The Room 29 May 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry! I feel so bad for him!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 – What can we do 28 May 2009 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Severus!!! What the heck are you doing!!

    Don't go!

    Poor Harry, I really hope that this doesn't send him over the edge again.

    Author's Response: :D I fear he won't listen to you!
Title: Chapter 9 – What can we do 28 May 2009 2:19 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Please don't kill him off or Alastor or Poppy xxx

    That was a great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Nobody will die in this fic beside Voldmort! :)

    Thank you very much for your reveiw!

Title: Chapter 8 – Brewing with Severus 24 May 2009 4:10 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus...having to carry a burden like that....don't kill him please xxx

    Loved that chapter xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 8 – Brewing with Severus 24 May 2009 3:09 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked how well the brewing went and how patient Severus was with Harry. But it's sad to think that Severus is so worried he might die that he needs to teach harry how to brew the Wolfsbane. I liked how Poppy is so concerned over him too, but that last part did not sound good.

    Author's Response: The next chapter is up now. Thank you very much for your review!

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