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Title: Chapter 8 – Brewing with Severus 23 May 2009 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! Poor Harry!

    This was great. I love the burdgeoning relationship between Harry and Severus, I just hope he doesn't die first before they become closer.

    He's a perfect mentor for Harry. I like Alastor, but Severus seems better as a role model for Harry, maybe because he's a little younger.

    Author's Response:

    Nobody will die in this fic beside Voldemort! :)

    Thank you very much for our review!

Title: Chapter 8 – Brewing with Severus 23 May 2009 9:36 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry finally getting a family and he thinks Severus is going to die. Poor poppy is really worried about Severus she really loves him.

    Author's Response: Yes, she does! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 - Lunchtime 21 May 2009 2:07 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like that Drag the baby into making sure Severus eats. Very sneaky. Because he will not want Harry missing any meal. Because he is so small.

    Author's Response: :D Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 4- A New Family 21 May 2009 1:31 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very sweet I like both Poppy and Alastor.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you do! :)
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 21 May 2009 1:17 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love it the other story is still my favorite. but this is a close second.

    Author's Response: Yes, this story here is a little hard to get warm with if you don't know my other stories (beside Harry and his new family). Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 - Lunchtime 20 May 2009 3:52 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus and Harry are so alike xxx

    I thought this was a great chapter xxx

    More soon please xx

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 - Lunchtime 20 May 2009 2:51 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was an interesting revelation about Severus there. It would appear he has an eating disorder, similiar to anorexia maybe? I'm not too familiar with those, since I have an opposite problem--I LOVE food too much!

    Can't wait to see what Severus and Harry get up to when they start brewing! It's good that Severus has Poppy to help him as well as Harry.

    Author's Response: Sometimes my medications make me feel like Severus. I need other people to tell me to eat then and I hate it. It is crazy to eat when you don't feel any hunger. The next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 - Lunchtime 19 May 2009 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I bet that Severus didn't like being scolded like a little child in front of Harry!

    Imagine Severus not liking to eat. I wish that I was that way, maybe I'd lose a little weight! LOL

    This story is very different with Poppy and Alastor being together. Nice twist.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6 – A Big Brother 18 May 2009 2:56 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love that Sev and Harry are like brothers. I can't wait to see where this story goes. I really like Poppy and Alastor as mom and dad.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 6 – A Big Brother 18 May 2009 1:04 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, Severus was being so sweet here, in his own way! I loved it.

    And Poppy's last comment was too funny! It's hard being the only woman in a house full of men.

    Author's Response: :D I'm glad you like it. Thank you for your review!

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