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Title: Chapter 6 – A Big Brother 18 May 2009 12:16 am
Reviewer: Brilliant (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loving the story so far so random but cute

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 6 – A Big Brother 17 May 2009 11:13 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting twist on the guardian theme. Poppy and Alastar, and Severus as Harry's brother. I'm looking forward to see where you're going with this.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 5 - New Problems 16 May 2009 4:02 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 5 - New Problems 16 May 2009 3:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Harry, he just never gets a break, does he? Severus really blows hot and cold. Harry doesn't know how to act or react .


    Nice chappie. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Next chapter will be up tomorrow.
Title: Chapter 5 - New Problems 15 May 2009 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry! He's lucky that Poppy, Severus and Alastor knew what to do since panic attacks are scary.
    Severus reminded me of my dad, who can be a real grouch first thing in the morning before he's had a cup of coffee.
    Great story so far.

    Author's Response: Oh, you commented twice. I didn't even know that this is possible. Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 5 - New Problems 15 May 2009 10:13 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that wa ssome panic attack! I felt really bad for Harry there, but luckily he had people who knew what to do and help him. I thought Severus's grouchiness was funny, it reminds me of my dad who can be a real bear in the mornings before he's had a cup of coffee.

    Author's Response: Yes, I know people like this as well. :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 4- A New Family 14 May 2009 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! Poppy was very maternal here and also firm, just what Harry needed. And I look forward to seeing some interaction with Severus next chapter, maybe?

    Author's Response: Yes, their is more of Severus and Harry in the next chapters. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 14 May 2009 1:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I know that Snape is probably their son or something, but that sounds bad, that he slept in their bed. I love Harry's thoughts on that. Too cute.

    I'm happy Harry is feeling wanted and cared for now.

    Author's Response: He was in a very bad shape when this happened. It was for monitoring. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 13 May 2009 9:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, does this mean that Severus will be Harry's brother? Great idea, and I have never seen if before with Pomfrey and Moody as the parents. Very, very unique and interesting!! I am very intrigued and looking forward to reading more! Good job so far!

    Author's Response: Yes, they will be brothers. You will soon find out more. I'm glad you like it so far. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 13 May 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This is getting very interesting. Are Poppy and Alastor married? Have they sort of adopted Severus as well as Harry?

    I really liked how Alastor comforted harry, it was sweet.

    Hope my questions will be answered soon.

    Author's Response:

    Almost all your questions will be answered in the next chapters. I will upload the next one tomorrow when I'm back from work. I never thought about them being married. I live in Germany and I'm not religious and so it doesn't matter for me. But I know that in the US people are a little picky about this topic and so I have to think about letting them be married, right? I could let them celebrate anniversary in a chapter. :) As for the Alstor/Poppy-Severus realtionship, you just have to wait for the next chapters because there it will be explained.

    Thank you very much for your review!


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