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Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 30 Jul 2010 2:22 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    CONSTANT VIGILANCE! LOL. Who could ever forget? ^^ Loved the training session.


    Re: Review of Chapter 13: No, no, the chapter title was fine (though, I hadn't remembered it). The "Come again?" was in direct response to the last line of the chapter, or rather, what I'd imagine Harry's first thought would be. It's kinda like, erm, "Excuse me?" or "Could you repeat that?"

    Sorry for not being clearer. English is my mother tongue and I *still* don't make any sense sometimes. LOL

    Author's Response:

    Ah, now I understand. Thanks for explaineing it!

    Yes, the traing sesion was a good scene. It's my only story that contains action and it was very hard for me to write it.

Title: Chapter 20 – The Final Horcrux 30 Jul 2010 1:26 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, that would be hard on the hope front. Poor guy. Love the exchange between Alastor and Albus

    Author's Response: Yes, they are two very powerful wizards. It must be cool and a bit scary to see them in  a fight.
Title: Chapter 19 – New Plans 30 Jul 2010 1:07 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Dumbledore. He is sooooooooo in the doghouse! ^^

    Author's Response: Hahaha!
Title: Chapter 18 – The Animagus 30 Jul 2010 12:52 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh! Very cool. I can list a few people who had probably better watch out, though! ^^

    Author's Response: :D
Title: Chapter 17 – The Confession 30 Jul 2010 12:43 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I like to use that method of evasion occasionally, too. Pretending to be asleep that is. Works well on some people. Others... not so much.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes,  I loved to spy on people that way when I was a child. :)
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 29 Jul 2010 11:48 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! I liked the little moment between Harry and Severus. It was very nice. ^^

    Nice chapter!

    Author's Response: They are two great characters to write together.
Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 29 Jul 2010 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh... dark gray fur... *wheels churn in head* You were deliberately ambiguous, weren't you? So many things could have that color fur...

    Author's Response: Hahaha, yes, I knew the readers would have a hard time guessing. :)
Title: Chapter 14 – Ill or Not Ill 29 Jul 2010 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    He shoulda just said he had a difficult time sleeping. Woulda had less trouble, methinks. ^^

    Author's Response: :)
Title: Chapter 13 – Severus Comes Again 29 Jul 2010 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Come again?

    Great chapter. Like the whole twilight concept. Very cool.

    Author's Response: You mean the title is bad? Makes no sense? English isn't my mother tongue so it can be that it is bad or misleading or whatever. The twillight concept is similar to the one in the night watch series of Lucianenko.
Title: Chapter 12 – Odd Reading Material 29 Jul 2010 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Man, Poppy's impossible to crack, isn't she? ^^ I'm kinda excited to see what kinds of things Harry's about to learn. Maybe he'll loan me the books when he's finished?

    Author's Response: She is a very tough woman.

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