Potions and Snitches
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Title: The Thawing of the Winter Prince 07 Apr 2011 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved how the boys were able to overcome the mind control. I was glad they didn't fight Sev. Oh by the way I am totally still interested! I think the Winter Prince should have the feel the same punishments he put the kids thru. I loved the way you depicted Sev during the battle. I can just see him trouncing Jalliron. As for the traitor, since they are probably from the high court, I think that they should definitely be demoted! Maybe something similar to a House-Elf status and be in the service to Nessie and the Snapes. I don't know, not really great with the ides, but love to read the stories! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Oh one last thing read the 'Two Hawks' stories. Loved them. Please add more soon!
Title: The Thawing of the Winter Prince 06 Apr 2011 11:54 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Good battle, easy to visualise - well done. I'm pretty clueless at guessing, so all I can think of is Oberon, or the younger son whose name eludes me. Punishment would depend on whether the information was given with malice or stupidity.
Title: The Thawing of the Winter Prince 06 Apr 2011 7:59 pm
Reviewer: Allisyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I still love your stories. They're so good!
    I'd say the traitor is Oberon or his son. And yes they should get the same punishment! If it was Oberon he deffinately should not be able to become ruler of the Seelie Court.
Title: Jarillion Triumphant 05 Apr 2011 11:35 pm
Reviewer: Allisyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So after 3 weeks of reading I've finally caught up with where you are. I LOVE THIS STORY! Oh man, so original and it keeps me hooked.
    Anyways, I think this chapter was pretty good. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love when things get intense, keeps me on edge. Hopefully the potion is just working slowly!
Title: Vampire Bedtime Stories 03 Apr 2011 11:44 pm
Reviewer: ceccecblue (Signed) [Report This]
    Um just one small thing, although Yorkshire is up North and it's one of the biggest county's, it doesn't share a border with Scotland.
    Otherwise, I enjoyed reading the chapter.
    CF x
Title: Jarillion Triumphant 02 Apr 2011 10:58 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! I was one that didnt get the update for the last chapter so had 2 fantastic chapters to read :D I cant wait to see what happens in the battle! hopefully the potion is just taking time to work and will do so before he can use Harry and Draco to hurt Severus :)
Title: Jarillion Triumphant 02 Apr 2011 2:38 pm
Reviewer: micking (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is awful. i am so afraid that the boys will hurt and kill severus and sarai.Please let the potion work.
    what has happened to harry potter fan fiction.com? Is it really for sale?
    I had a hard time finding you and your stories.

    Author's Response:

    Hi!

    Nice to see you over here!

    I would have posted this on hpff too, only I ran into the same problem you did. I don't know what's up with the website there, maybe it's a continuation of the April Fool's joke? Although I think this is carrying it a bit too far. 

    Just so you know, I post on 3 different sites, hpff, here, and ff.net.  So if for some reason you can't find a post on one site, it'll be on the other. For the last 2 weeks ff.net was acting up and I couldn't post there until recently.  Now I guess its hpff's turn. 

    As for the boys, you'll have to wait and see what happens.  I know, I'm terrible!

Title: The Darkness Within 18 Mar 2011 3:51 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, what a sadly-desperate, depressing experience they're all suffering through. I just hope the potion plan works out without backfiring somehow. AND I hope that Severus & Sarai show up in time!

    Author's Response: Yes, it's terrible what Jarillion is doing to them. But then, he is a very nasty evil person and this is what he lives for, to turn innocents into cold-blooded killers.  Sev and Sarai are on their way, never fear!
Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain 18 Mar 2011 3:21 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely fascinating-- as always!!!
Title: The Darkness Within 17 Mar 2011 4:07 am
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Thanks for the update! I am very much looking forward to the 'showdown'. I hope to much time hasn't passed in the mortal world, I was hoping for more Nessamaye interation with the brothers and their friends.

    Author's Response: oh, they'll be getting some of that don't worry.  After they've all come out of this and had some time to heal and everything. 

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