Loved your portrayal of Baba Yaga in this chapter. Nicely writ, as always - I look forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain
| 07 Mar 2011 12:26 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Absolutely beautiful! I loved the story of baba yaga and how she is going to help them. The descriptions of her house and weapon care are also great! Hope you have a great vacation!
| Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain
| 06 Mar 2011 11:25 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Jarillion is soon going to wish he'd never interfered with Snape's family.
I like how you are able to adapt and incorporate various myths into your stories.
| Title: The Dark Guardian
| 03 Mar 2011 6:05 am
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| Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Loved Baba Yaga and how she is a sister princess. Have a great trip. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Title: Baba Yaga's Bargain
| 02 Mar 2011 7:35 pm
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| Reviewer: badgerlady (Anonymous)
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I'm sorry to say that the farther you get from the HP world, the less interesting I find this story. A pastiche of every known fantasy tradition doesn't make for a coherent narrative or engaging character development. Just one person's opinion, of course, but I did enjoy your earlier writing and keep hoping you'll get back to developing the family dynamic in the context of the HP universe that you established so well at the beginning.
| Title: Evil is A Choice
| 24 Feb 2011 6:33 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Oooh... I sincerely hope that Harry, Draco, and especially Nesmay haven't bitten off more than they can chew. It's good to see solidarity amongst the cousins, but I'm biting my nails even more than Nesmay at the prospect of them having to study Dark Magic. Now I want more of Baba Yaga!
| Title: Evil is A Choice
| 21 Feb 2011 11:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Thanks for the update! Draco is definitely devious. :) I am so ready for Sev and Sari to rescue them. I so hate the suspense, lol, but I guess that is what makes the story so good, and keeps the readers coming back. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ah, clever Draco. ^^
Hmm... I do think I am inclined to believe their being found by Baba Yaga shall bode well.
Nicely done!
| Title: Blood Trail
| 06 Feb 2011 1:37 am
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| Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous)
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I started reading your series and fell in love! Great job! I love all the pairings you have! I am so glad Sev has someone so good. I am hoping that maybe Nesmay might end up at Hogwarts with Harry and Draco. I love her character, she's such a spitfire! Can't wait to read what is coming up! Please update soon. Thanks
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