| Title: Fairy Revel
| 18 Aug 2010 12:08 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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I liked Nesmay a lot. She has guts and sincerity and wit. Her mischievousness is very endearing, though it seems like she is in danger in seelie court. Perhaps she could go to Prince manor so she can grow up safely? With Sarai there, there won't even be a problem with her education and such! All in all a good chapter. Humm, except for the cliffy in the end. Hope you will post the next chapter soon!
Hmm. . .maybe Titania wants to foster Nesmay with Sev and Sarai--possibly train her to be one of the Blades? A "long term" replacement for Sarai maybe?
I loved this chapter--and Nesmay is a peach!
V.
A possible foster sister for Harry & Draco? That would be interesting
I think I know. But I won't say anything lest it ruin it for the others. I think it's quite interesting, but I agree with Harry. Something is going to happen. Kudos on a well written chapter.
I REALLY like Nesmay! I bet she's going to come live with Sev, Sarai, Harry and Draco. I also was glad to see Luna and Duncan. They are perfect for each other and their kids will be adorable. Great chapter and the meeting between Titania and Sev is going to be interesting, I can tell. Bravo!
Oooh is the Queen going to ask Severus and Sarai to look after Nesmay? that would be cool to get her away from all those pompus cousins of hers! cant wait to find out :)
Nice. Kudos on a well written two chapters. I'm looking forward to the next one.
| Title: Earth Bond
| 11 Aug 2010 12:21 am
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Yet another good chapter. Maybe Dudley will have learnt his lesson by Christmas....Nice that Sev practically apologised for being wrong, rare event.
It would be good to meet Duncan again at the revel, and maybe Phil and family too.
I did like the punishments and look forward to learning more about the fae culture. I love the Heir powers :]
| Title: Earth Bond
| 10 Aug 2010 8:32 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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That was a great one! I really liked how Sirius and Petunia responded to Sev and also Draco's punishment. They behaved like mature adults as I had hoped. The blood and earth bond sound fantastic too. I bet you are planning on using that sometime soon!
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