| Title: Ambushed!
| 30 Jul 2010 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Rowena Arum (Anonymous)
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Hey, Snapegirl. It's your friend Rowena from Fanfiction.net. This is my third(?) time reading this story and I just got to say that I love it. I also love how you make the romance and the action flow together the way it does. I hope my writings will be as good as yours are. In November, I'm getting a Fanfiction account and I want to send you the first chapters from my stories. G2G now, bye.
Hi.
Just re-reading both stories and wanted to say that they are brill.
Also, and I hope you are not offended by this, in this chapter you have Harry punching Percy Weasley in the gryff common room....and then in chapter 13 you have crouch refering to Percy as his assistant.
Maybe you already caught that...but it confused me so i thought i would mention it.
jay
Hmm I wonder if its wrong of me not to have minded Dudley being poisoned...it certainly would have taught him a lesson...though I guess he is just an impulsive jealous teeneager so maybe death would be a bit harsh hehe I kinda wanted to slap Sirius in this chapter, when he was sparing with Severus and right at the end there, how many times does he need Sev to kick his butt before he realises that he isnt the scrawny ass boy he knew...
Stupid Dudley, he was so afraid of seeing the snake yet he wants to steal the egg form the poisonous snake. Dudley is sooo stupid. Wow the ending to this was dramatic. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 24 Jul 2010 1:41 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Umm....I'm really hoping that Sirius will come to his senses. If there's two ways of doing it, it would either be Tuney smacking him or Harry stunning him...or something.
That idiot... Sirius is in for a world of hurt...
| Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 23 Jul 2010 7:28 am
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| Reviewer: Tutti Frutti (Anonymous)
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Awesome chapter!!! And I seriously doubt Sirius will come to his senses. He's waay to hot-headed for his own good, meaning he is incapable of thinking before he acts. Hehe. Can Sirius cause Harry some harm? Please??
I think it might fit quite nicely in the plot. And Harry wont like Sirius anymore since they obviously don't get along too well. Well anyway, great chapter once again and I look forward to the next update!
Great chapter as always, don't let Hannah bring you down. You weren't bashing him and you write very well.
-Autumn
| Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 22 Jul 2010 11:56 pm
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Enjoyed the boys falling out - can't have things running too smoothly. Petunia seems to have turned into a rational human being, but she's still got a bit of work to do on her family!
I did think Severus was showing off a bit with his superior fighting skills - it seemed a bit rude to a guest, even if they're not your favourite person. But, hopefully you've got a good way of getting them on the same side eventually. And I hope the runespoor survives to hatch its eggs.
| Title: Sirius Misconceptions
| 22 Jul 2010 9:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I don't understand why you have such a hatred for Sirius. I mean, honestly, he'd never attack Harry, even if this mangled up world you've created where Dudley is his new son. Enough with the Sirius bashing already; it's really tiresome. Not to mention completely unoriginal and uncreative.
~HannahRammah
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