Wonderful chapter as always! I'm glad that Smidgen lives. I loved it when Philip got in Dumbledore's face. "Actually, it's Lord Snape to you" LOL Go Philip! I can't wait to see what happens next. I loved it!
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| 17 May 2010 9:57 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Very cool! I am so glad that Smidgen and all others on the side of light are alive and well!!
Ah I love it. Harry didn't have to end up being a murderer before his 20s even if Voldemort did deserve to die!!! Can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming chapters. I am so happy that you allowed Smidgen to live all though I would have rather liked to see Moody and Phillip have their way with Crouch Jr. I wonder what secrets will be revieled and I can't wait to see Sev and his Fiance get together.
Thank you for not killing her!! loved the chapter as usual, I found myself wondering if you know how many more chapters you have planned for the story, I think I could read about these characters forever lol :)
| Title: All Debts Paid
| 17 May 2010 7:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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You deserve a standing ovation for this chapter.
I cackled madly when Philip finally cornered Albus Dumbledore. I especially loved the line, "It's LORD Snape to you." Do not underestimate that vampire! Queen Titania proved her worth and I would gladly serve her for the rest of my life if I ever had the chance to meet her.
I must admit that I'm very happy Smidgen lives. I actually teared up when I read about her permanently damaged wing. But, I know, the tears are for the next chapter. And knowing you - which I do! - you'll make me cry when it comes time for Harry, Severus and Draco to bid farewell to Philip and his family.
I truly enjoyed the fairy Queen and vampire Lord taking Dumbledore down a notch. He certainly needed to be taught a lesson. And Voldemort's punishment is very befitting. My heart broke when I read of the torture he'd inflicted on Titania's daughter.
For now, I bid you farewell.
Long live Smidgen!
- Jewels
Great chapter - Titiania was a force t be reckoned with. Albus was smart to give back the cup.
What a prefect punishment for Voldie,
Hmmm, when Titiania said that his line had not ended, does that mean that Voldie has offspring somewhere and if so, poor kid. If he/she is a decent person, I can only hope people treat them well.
| Title: All Debts Paid
| 17 May 2010 6:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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*smiles* I'm glad she survived. This was a wonderful chapter (good grief, but Albus is squirming) and I hope to see more. Just out of curiosity, but is this the last story in the series?
That is a difficult choice (and shame on you for another cliffie!), on the one hand I'd hate to see her die. On the other, what better way to die then saving a friend? Ohhh...just don't make us wait too long, whatever you decide! Good job on this chapter anyways.
Hurrh! Cedric lives! Now Smdgen has to survive. I can't imagine Snape Manor without her there. Please save her!
A wonderfully exciting battle and Titania ROCKS! Severus, Sarai and Phil are right up there with the Queen.
Wow!
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