This was awesome, absolutely amazing! I loved it! I'm glad Cedric lived and I hope Smidgen will too. Can't wait to see what happens to Old Snake Face.
Ok if I hadn't said this before this is the most AWESOME story EVER!!!!! I can't get enough I sure hope that Smidgen gets to live as Harry and Draco and even Sev still need her. Great job can't wait to see what happens to old Moldy shorts!
| Title: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010 6:31 am
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| Reviewer: Micheela (Anonymous)
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Wow, just wow. Awesome battle scene with justice for Moody and Cedric. I think Smidgen deserves to live. Why save Harry from the guilt of Cedric's death only to inflice Smidgen's upon him?
Let Smidgen live. I like Smidgen too much to see her die...
| Title: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Awesome! My god, this was amazing! I loved every bit of it! I do hope Voldemort finally gets his due without any more deaths for the light!!
loved this chapter! please dont kill smidgeon. just make it that she will be wounded for the rest of her life and unable to be a messanger and therefore lives with the snape family! :D
great chapter....loved the deal with the runespore
Excellent chapter. As inventive as always and I especially liked the runespoor. Not sure about Cedric. I suppose it depends if you want Harry to feel guilty for suggesting they share the cup. Maybe if you do kill him off he could have a more heroic end than just a quick AK.
Great chapter! I particularly loved hte Runespoor and hte way you integrated the fake Moody turning Draco into a ferret. Yes, Cedric ought to live! With Phil there and Smidgen there ought to at least be a chance of him surviving. Please let Cedric live. As always, you've done a fabulous job with this chapter.
| Title: Gauntlet
| 14 May 2010 5:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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I should have done this yesterday but I caught a bad cold, so, please, forgive me.
Hmm... Who shall live and who shall die? I think Cedric should die; it will help move the plot along and keep the readers anticipated for the next part of the story. :bites lip: This is a very difficult decision for me to make: I have half a mind to tell you to kill Philip as well but I /really/ want to see him confront Albus. Hmm... but that is easily rectifyable. Poison him; a slow, agonizing poison that destroys him from the inside out. (Am I cruel or what?)
I really, really liked the different third task. I was biting my nails the entire time I read him traveling through that maze.
I'm sorry this is short.
Update soon my darling.
Always yours,
Jewels
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