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Title: Merlin Help Us All 03 Oct 2009 12:39 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol loved the chapter, the idea of having Harry and Draco spend the night made me chuckle, it was such a parent type thing to do, im glad that Smidgeon was there to be with them though so that they werent alone :)

    Author's Response:

    Well, I couldn't leave them all alone there, I'm not that cruel!

    Check out my new Halloween story set in this universe, it's called Bubble Bubble

    and thanks for reading!

Title: Merlin Help Us All 03 Oct 2009 2:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry and Draco!!!

    Will these two ever learn? They have really hard heads don't they.

    I'm glad that Severus told them that he still cares about them, even though he was furious with them.

    Great chappie Snapegirl.

    Author's Response:

    They do! Like a certain Potions Master, LOL!

    yeah, Severus would never let them think he hates them, they are, after all his kids.

    Check out my new Halloween story, it's a companion to this series.

Title: Merlin Help Us All 03 Oct 2009 12:49 am
Reviewer: RaeKelly (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought I'd leave a review on here this time. :)

    This chapter was great...loved Draco asking for a shovel. Yes, Draco dear, when you continue to do something you've been punished for before, death is always to be feared. :D

    Author's Response:

    Most definitely! And Draco does know better. 

    I've just posted the Halloween companion piece for this called Prince Manor: Bubble, Bubble.

    Hope you're feeling all right and you didn't hurt yourself too badly.

Title: Merlin Help Us All 02 Oct 2009 7:50 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I really liked how Snape, Harry and Draco are in this chapter and the auror characters were done very nicely too.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing this and I enjoyed playing about with them and the aurors. I have also written a Halloween story set in this AU called Prince Manor: Bubble Bubble. Check it out for some Halloween fun.
Title: Merlin Help Us All 02 Oct 2009 6:57 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this! I see Severus uses the same parenting technique I did!!!! I did that to one of my six year old sons when he took something from a story. Had to go back to the story, give it back to the manager and apology and then our next door neighbor who was a cop, took him to jail for a few hours. That is a hard thing for any parent to do, but no matter what the age, it gets the point across. We never had trouble from either twin from that time on. (His twin got to "visit" his brother in jail).

    Author's Response: Oh my God! That is too funny! Well, I'm sure it wasn't for your son, but I think it taught him a valuable lesson in not breaking the law. I think if more parents did that, some of their kids wouldn't shoplift when they're teenagers.  Some of my friends did that to their kids as well, with the same kind of results.  I have posted a companion piece to this called Bubble Bubble today if you want to go read it!
Title: It's All Greek To Me 02 Oct 2009 3:04 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how you described Harry's treatment, it sounds so realistic. You're really good at that, you know. This next challenge sounds very interesting, and a lot less dangerous than the last one. I was glad when Sev told off Albus, he needed it!

    But now they're really in for it. A brawl! Hope they don't get arrested!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I like describing the healing scenes, I used to want to be a doctor.  yes, it is very different but it's also as difficult in its own way.  Learning a completely new language and then translating a riddle is hard. 

    He sure did and Severus knew it too.

    Arrested? Umm . . .go read the next chapter.

Title: Merlin Help Us All 02 Oct 2009 3:00 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I did, very much so! Great job here, Sev certainly taught them a good lesson. I laughed and laughed over certain parts here.

    Draco with the comment about digging his own grave.

    Harry's comment to Severus about being a model prisoner and Severus' response.

    And the last part was great too, especially when Hermione tells Ron that all he has to do is let her tell him what to do.

    Brilliant!

    Please update again soon!

    Author's Response: Okay I will. That punshment was inspired by a few friends of mine who told me that their relatives experienced what Harry and Draco did. I have just posted a companion piece to this called Bubble Bubble.
Title: It's All Greek To Me 02 Oct 2009 2:53 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This is such a great series and I love it. The warmth between Sev and Harry is excellent and I look eagerly for the next chapter. Uh, oh a bar fight. Not good, really not good. But at least you updated and now I can go read the next one!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hurry and let me know how you liked the next part please!
Title: It's All Greek To Me 30 Sep 2009 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I think a couple of Snapes will be in trouble depending on how much force they use. Or just the fact that they scared Sev yet again. Yeesh, those two can't ever find a break can they?

    Author's Response: No and they will be in a lot of trouble.  Check out the next chapter to see what happens to them. It's bad . . .
Title: It's All Greek To Me 30 Sep 2009 4:17 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If anyone believes that Severus is favoring his son, there is something wrong with that individual.

    I loved the idea of using a sphinx for the second task. Simply beautiful creatures and the tast is one of pure mental strength; a brilliant twist from the original tasks that tested only one's outer strength. Now I am curious as to what the final task shall be.

    Poor Harry; he must be slightly annoyed that Philip knows Greek but won't help him.

    You and your damnable cliffhangers; I think you're going to beat me in that category when I was once notorious for them. ::grins::

    Just do me a favor.

    Update soon.

    Keep smiling and keep writing!

    Always yours,

    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, well there will always be people who think when a professor has a son or daughter in their clas, they favor them.

    The last task will be different as well, and I'm glad you like the sphinx.

    Harry is kind of annoyed but he understands that as a champion he needs to figure things out, mostly, on his own. 

    Haha, I am known for my cliffies!

    But . . .I've updated!


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