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Reviews For Return to Prince Manor
Oh, I loved the Slytherins' detentions. Too perfect. They did deserve it, and hopefully won't test Snape again. I'm glad that Draco and Harry are starting the Duelling club again. This should be very interesting. I can't wait to see your surprise task!! Great chappie Snapegirl, and I really enjoyed your chappie of Ariadne too. Author's Response: That line was one we used to say in our house when we were kids growing up. They won't be testing Severus anymore after that little exercise. And it'll give everybody a head start on how to defend themselves just in case something goes wrong. I hope you'll like it. It's kind of based off of the Greek myths. I'm going to post a another chapter of Ariadne right now and you can see her growing up and meet her baby sister Pheadra too!
Love the idea of a dueling club too. Author's Response: I would hope so! I can't think of any teenager who would actually ENJOY that kind of thing, even if they're athletic. Severus was really clever, no? Hope you like the next one!
Author's Response: First task is now up and posted, in case you didn't read it. I'm a little late with my responses.
Author's Response: For you, but not the Slytherins, LOL! Just wait till the next one! The dueling club will really help Harry as you'll see in a future chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, for once Severus got what he deserved, LOL!
Author's Response: Oh yes, there will be mega trouble with that one!
Author's Response: Yeah those two are going to be trouble for poor Harry. I love Hermione and Draco together and this is a first writing that pairing for me too. Yes, Ron will end up with someone soon, you'll see.
And Rita was excellent, a real journalist, without morals or scruples though. Can't wait to see what happens to the Slytherins. Author's Response: Thanks and I agree with you on all counts. More surprises to come!
I am happy that Hermione is able to stand up for herself. That is so rare in a woman... It is no surprise that the Hat placed her in the mighty house of lions. Even a dragon may fear a lioness's challenging roar. Rita Skeeter is absolute fun to read; I think she has to be my favourite character of all the new characters introduced in Goblet of Fire. She is pushy, stubborn and a journalist through and through! She knows what her rabid readers want and she delivers! Of course, I don't think Severus will be too pleased when he reads 'financially troubled father' in the Daily Prophet. I have a feeling this Karkaroff is going to a bit more intelligent and dangerous than the one in canon. He is a former Death Eater; surely some of the killer instinct, the bloodlust, is still there, boiling beneath the surface? He had better tread carefully when it comes to the Snapes; Philip is not a particularly patient immortal... My original idea was for Philip to be a white tiger in his Animagus form, named, Stormwing. (The name will make more sense once I've published more of DLR) You have my permission to play around with him; although I think a large tiger might be a bit conspicuous. If you can't find a solution to him being a cat, a snake such as a King Cobra or Black Mamba will do in stead. The name stays. You know I'm always looking forward to the next update. Always yours, Jewels. Author's Response: No, Sev isn't losing it, but under his new policy, he won't dock points or give detention unless he catches a student misbehaving. He came along when all the Slytherins were fighting and didn't see Ron cast the hex upon Nott and Nott didn't know who cast it either, spells were flying everywhere. So for once, the Gryffies got away with it. I love writing Hermione as a take-charge and tough girl who's not afraid to stand up for herself. yes, she's brilliant, but she also has guts. Rita is Rita, nuff said! And no, Sev will not be pelased when that article comes out and Dumbledore asks if he wants a raise, LOL! Nor when the staff discuss the fact that if he was in difficulties, he could have come and asked them for some kind of help. Karkaroff is cagey and clever, more so than in canon, and he will be causing trouble for the Snapes along with Viktor. I think I could work him in as a Black Mamba, I need a form that lends itself to being hidden and while a white tiger is awesome, it's also conspicuous. I'll try and post the next one soon, in the meantime check out THH please!
Author's Response: Okay I'll be updating soon. Yes, Hermione ought to be a poster child for I AM WITCH, HEAR ME HEX YOUR PANTS OFF! |
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