Oddly enough, I loved the fight between Harry and Sev. It was perfectly done!
I also enjoyed the moments between Harry and his new friend. Will he play a larger part in the story?
I have a feeling Healer Sandrilas is going to help Sev come to terms with a lot of things. And I can't help but to think of time he and Harry were with Dumbledore and he asked Harry to call him Grandpa, but Snape flat out refused to consider being on more...familial terms. It would be nice if Sandrilas helps Snape reconsider that decision.
I'm eagerly awaiting the chaper with McGonagall and Dumbledore terrorizing the muggle neighborhood.
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Oh good, because I wasn't sure if it sounded ridiculous or not.
Yes, you'll see more of Paul in future chapters.
Sandrilas is a damn good shrink. Yeah, that's true, and maybe if Severus relates that incident, Alec can help him see that Albus is lonely and looking for a family.
Yeah that chapter is coming up in a few and should be very funny!